A little original... a little free time

[Tranman66]

i finally found a little free time today being early release from school. i started playing and this comes about... i know its not ready, the playing wasnt perfect, but i figure i post it anyway...

oh yeah, that buzz on the fret... i gotta fix the guitar.

http://s8.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=02ZL2 ... AX1RK7HF9V

[mangold]

this isnt bad at all, it could use some more substance, but its got alot of potential. i wouldhave liked some lyrics of course, but this is pretty good.

[Tranman66]

any more comment?

[eliot1171]

I thought the content of the song was great. I think the two parts go well with each other. My only complaint would be, for this kind of song your guitar sounded a little too tinny.