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Something New, Looking For Advice

Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 10, 2005 11:46 am

This is something kind of new, me and my buddy have been working on, so it will get better, its still in the early stages. Id appreciate any critiquing, any ideas on where it could go, basically anything. Thanks

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press music, on the right then the song is ahha

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Unread post by hofdaddy » Mon Jan 10, 2005 2:42 pm

I liked new song #3 alot! I wasn't diggin ahha. Just my opinion though.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Jan 10, 2005 2:46 pm

hmm, i like the rhythm but i dont know what to say about the progression... what are you gonna do with it? thats a tough progression to sing with...
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 10, 2005 5:50 pm

thanks for the input, yea the "ahha" song is really new, its just something we were working with, my buddy plays lead over it, he actually came up with the progression and i toyed with the rhythm, the lead guitar fills it out nice, ill try to get a finished product up, thanks for the feedback

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Mon Jan 10, 2005 11:20 pm

Hey man do you mind if I use your #3 riff with a little variation. It fits one of my songs that Im wrighting perfectly.
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Tue Jan 11, 2005 4:39 pm

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