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eliot1171
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by eliot1171 » Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:01 pm
Please listen to my cover of Walk on the Ocean done originally by Toad and the Wet Sprocket, I think! The vocals are done by me (verses and backup on chorus) and my roommate (chorus). The guitar part is very simple. We did it in one take each, using the most basic Cakewalk software and a computer mic. Please ignore the constant wave sounds through the whole song. I deleted the work file and can’t remove them.
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by You_Enjoy_Myself » Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:15 pm
Sounds like a pretty solid cover, you guys stuck to the original quite closely. Nice vocals, and I could have done without the wave noises, although they weren't too intrusive. Nice job.
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by MWR » Sat Jan 08, 2005 10:09 pm
Very nice vocals on the verse. Some of the better vocals I've heard in a while.
Can't say much else becuase I don't know the original. I actually started to critique the songwriting until I realized it was a cover. I'm stupid.
Anyway, nice cover. Keep 'em coming.
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by jellyfish » Mon Jan 17, 2005 9:30 am
I liked it. I think IM gonna learn this song now.
Your vocals were GOOD. Guitar was GOOD.
Not too much to critique... Good Job.
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by DMBartender » Sun Jan 23, 2005 4:50 pm
great song, good cover. not a fan of the wave sounds. nice job.
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