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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sun Jan 02, 2005 1:32 pm

wait... why couldnt you just play it on the PurePlayer on the right?
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Jan 03, 2005 1:35 am

yea but my internet kept coming in and out, almost like it was mad at me for trying to play something. now it's been down and i'm having to use this internet (which is websensed from downloading and streaming). so i'll come back and check it out as soon as the net comes back up.

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Unread post by briguy945 » Mon Jan 03, 2005 2:11 am

Very nice melodic song. If I could give you any criticism on it I would say to strengthen the part around the 1:15 mark. I think you could do a little more with what you have. Overall very nice, I've enjoyed all of your tunes although they are a bit similar (not a bad thing).

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Unread post by Appfro » Sat Jan 08, 2005 10:58 am

I like it a lot. i was a little disapointed that there were no lyrics, but that's ok. the song is excellent. i like every part about it. i think the mixing was really good too so good job at that.

good job...i really liked the lead

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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:09 am

Appsoldier wrote:I like it a lot. i was a little disapointed that there were no lyrics, but that's ok. the song is excellent. i like every part about it. i think the mixing was really good too so good job at that.

good job...i really liked the lead
hooray, thanks for coming back and listeningto it. 8)
My brother has a friend who can sing, she's moving away soon to work with Randy Jackson and make an album..
but before she moves she says she will sing some songs with me.
When i get those done i will post those.
I dont sing because, even though i can hit thenotes, and i can stay in key, my voice still seems girly and.. um.. yeah.
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