thanks man. i admit that i need work singin.Tranman66 wrote:Ok, my turn let see.
Guitar: 9/10, you really need one guitar man, dont over do it. a lead is nice, but dont over do it.
Vocal: 4/10, well i can tell you that you have a decent speaking voice, but youre not singing. Practice the do re mi, sing the scale. Move your octave up. Its really low on your speaking tone right now. Add emotions. Add volume changes. Importantly, add rhythm.
i know harder to do it than to say it, but i think at some point, you will get there. overall, not bad. tough song.
My "The Stone" cover...
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why do you hate a person cuz hes asking for advice? i wouldnt judge a person on his music.Swe dmbfan wrote:i hate him after his shitty gravedigger song/thread.. go back, look and you see why!Willin wrote:Swede hates praise dave for unknown reasons. Anyway, i'll try setting up now. If it works, i'll IM you it. Thanks.
i tryed to be nice, but he sucks(really) and cant take that someone tryes to help him.
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Put on some heavy strings and Jam the night away.
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hey i thought you left?Swe dmbfan wrote:i hate him after his shitty gravedigger song/thread.. go back, look and you see why!Willin wrote:Swede hates praise dave for unknown reasons. Anyway, i'll try setting up now. If it works, i'll IM you it. Thanks.
i tryed to be nice, but he sucks(really) and cant take that someone tryes to help him.
so what if my gd cover sucked? i was new. stfu
i can take when some1 tries to help me, i cant take when some1 insults me without a purpose
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Will you seriously do that, I can play the song almost perfect, I really think Im fucking up the pause though, that could help.Willin wrote:Hey praisedave, if I make a video showing you where the pause is in The Stone, could you host it for me perchance? I just got a new digi cam and want to try to record with it, but have no where to post the vids.
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okkkeeeyy, prase dave, you win. you are a great guitar player and sing like a god... sorry for all the bad posts that i have made..
tell me when your cd´s out.
tell me when your cd´s out.
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STFU! dont post anything when you dont know shit.Tranman66 wrote:why do you hate a person cuz hes asking for advice? i wouldnt judge a person on his music.Swe dmbfan wrote:i hate him after his shitty gravedigger song/thread.. go back, look and you see why!Willin wrote:Swede hates praise dave for unknown reasons. Anyway, i'll try setting up now. If it works, i'll IM you it. Thanks.
i tryed to be nice, but he sucks(really) and cant take that someone tryes to help him.
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JEZUS CHRIST! you just dont get it!Swe dmbfan wrote:okkkeeeyy, prase dave, you win. you are a great guitar player and sing like a god... sorry for all the bad posts that i have made..
tell me when your cd´s out.
i kno i am not a great guitar player and i am a below average singer. you know that too. Every single thread in which you have responded to one of my comments you have said something insulting or degrading. You've admitted that you dont like me and frankly, i dont give a shit! get the hell over it and try to be contructive. in this thread for example your first postwas that i had potential at guitar, and i thank you for that. then you accused me of not listening to some1's advice because i asked a question about it in order to get more information so i can improve. then you said you were leaving because i explained myself. then you came back to say that you did not like me and now you're being a sarcastic asshole. just try completing this statement:
(name of user), i found your song (name of song) to show good examples of (good things). however i feel you could improve in these areas (bad things)
damn, now im angry, i cant sleep like this

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my cam does that too, i was pissed off b/c i bought it for the specific purpose of posting vids here.Willin wrote:Hmmm, that's really gay. I think my camera can record video but no sound. I'll go try to find my brother's camera and see if that works.
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i drink a glas of hot milk when i´m angry and cant sleep.! its great..praisedave wrote:JEZUS CHRIST! you just dont get it!Swe dmbfan wrote:okkkeeeyy, prase dave, you win. you are a great guitar player and sing like a god... sorry for all the bad posts that i have made..
tell me when your cd´s out.
i kno i am not a great guitar player and i am a below average singer. you know that too. Every single thread in which you have responded to one of my comments you have said something insulting or degrading. You've admitted that you dont like me and frankly, i dont give a shit! get the hell over it and try to be contructive. in this thread for example your first postwas that i had potential at guitar, and i thank you for that. then you accused me of not listening to some1's advice because i asked a question about it in order to get more information so i can improve. then you said you were leaving because i explained myself. then you came back to say that you did not like me and now you're being a sarcastic asshole. just try completing this statement:
(name of user), i found your song (name of song) to show good examples of (good things). however i feel you could improve in these areas (bad things)
damn, now im angry, i cant sleep like this
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yeah but my family only buys skim and that shit suxSwe dmbfan wrote:i drink a glas of hot milk when i´m angry and cant sleep.! its great..praisedave wrote:JEZUS CHRIST! you just dont get it!Swe dmbfan wrote:okkkeeeyy, prase dave, you win. you are a great guitar player and sing like a god... sorry for all the bad posts that i have made..
tell me when your cd´s out.
i kno i am not a great guitar player and i am a below average singer. you know that too. Every single thread in which you have responded to one of my comments you have said something insulting or degrading. You've admitted that you dont like me and frankly, i dont give a shit! get the hell over it and try to be contructive. in this thread for example your first postwas that i had potential at guitar, and i thank you for that. then you accused me of not listening to some1's advice because i asked a question about it in order to get more information so i can improve. then you said you were leaving because i explained myself. then you came back to say that you did not like me and now you're being a sarcastic asshole. just try completing this statement:
(name of user), i found your song (name of song) to show good examples of (good things). however i feel you could improve in these areas (bad things)
damn, now im angry, i cant sleep like this
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i think milk cost about 1 $praisedave wrote:yeah but my family only buys skim and that shit suxSwe dmbfan wrote:i drink a glas of hot milk when i´m angry and cant sleep.! its great..praisedave wrote:JEZUS CHRIST! you just dont get it!Swe dmbfan wrote:okkkeeeyy, prase dave, you win. you are a great guitar player and sing like a god... sorry for all the bad posts that i have made..
tell me when your cd´s out.
i kno i am not a great guitar player and i am a below average singer. you know that too. Every single thread in which you have responded to one of my comments you have said something insulting or degrading. You've admitted that you dont like me and frankly, i dont give a shit! get the hell over it and try to be contructive. in this thread for example your first postwas that i had potential at guitar, and i thank you for that. then you accused me of not listening to some1's advice because i asked a question about it in order to get more information so i can improve. then you said you were leaving because i explained myself. then you came back to say that you did not like me and now you're being a sarcastic asshole. just try completing this statement:
(name of user), i found your song (name of song) to show good examples of (good things). however i feel you could improve in these areas (bad things)
damn, now im angry, i cant sleep like this
best on the board:
http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic ... &start=150
Speeny: You two are gods among men
http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic ... &start=150
Speeny: You two are gods among men
yeah so are vegetables but i dont eat them eitherWillin wrote:It's good for you.
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