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New idea to redo an old song, check it out

Unread post by Tranman66 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 3:49 pm

this is an instrumental of a new idea that i want to use to redo an old song. Its rough beween verse and chorus. Still needs practice. This was fun, because its the first time i made up chords.

http://www.angelfire.com/me5/kmt/

I have a desktop mic, it got noise cancelation, so its extra sensitive to loud sound but less with details. So i am sorry for the sudden change of volume at times.

comment see if this is worth continuing.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 5:20 pm

I know theres not much to critique, but i want mainly opinion on the chord progression. cuz its not gonna be all strumming like that.
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Unread post by mangold » Thu Dec 02, 2004 6:13 pm

i dont know what you mean when you say that you want to redo an old song and you made up the chord progression...i cunfuzzled
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:41 pm

the chorus has new progression. the verse is the same with variations.
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Unread post by mangold » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:21 pm

what old song though?
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:34 pm

dont even worry about it, i am changing everything except the chords from the verse and the lyrics. melody is gone too. so like a brand new song lol. "No Reason"
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Unread post by mangold » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:39 pm

okay... it wasnt bad, no real mistakes it just wasnt anything special. kinda plain. well played though.
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