original intro #2

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original intro #2

Unread post by Coldchillin » Wed Dec 01, 2004 9:12 pm

I know I know. Why am I posting a second intro clip without finishing the first one? Sorry...It's short, I want to know again if it's worth expanding on. There's not much to critique, but say what you can!

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Wed Dec 01, 2004 9:47 pm

It's good, but kinda short and incomplete. Therefore make it a lil repetitive. i like this demo better, but add another line to your main riff.
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Unread post by Coldchillin » Wed Dec 01, 2004 10:04 pm

Thanks. Yeah, I know it's plain. It was about 10 minutes worth of thinking. I am trying to figure out something to add to it...
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