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Matty Boom
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by Matty Boom » Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:23 pm
not bad at all...guitar was solid and the vocals were pretty on most of the time...but i got the feeling that you were just whispering almost...let that shit out and sang' it dawg...but it does work for you i guess, so maybe not
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by chosta » Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:31 pm
i'd like some ale
edit: good cover
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by Tranman66 » Tue Nov 30, 2004 8:19 pm
i like your whispery voice, but a lil lest would be good, good guitar. Is this layered? you on the second guitar?
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by deceptivehero » Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:57 am
I thought you did a pretty decent job but a little less whispering in your voice would be cool.
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by DMBartender » Wed Dec 01, 2004 1:10 am
let it ring brother. nice job on the guitar.
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by mbgreen » Wed Dec 01, 2004 1:39 am
The voice sounded forced. Nice rhythm though.
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by paulaitchison » Wed Dec 01, 2004 4:48 am
song played great..... but i agree about the wispering, dont have the mike close and sing out to it ..... almost like your trying to hide your true voice... pitch is good and theres feeling there.....id say sing louder...even if it means slightly less control
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by wench » Wed Dec 01, 2004 7:29 am
thanks all, yeah I'd say control's the main reason I'm a pussy
and yeah thats me on the second guitar (the one playin the Timmy part and then the harmonics and shit at the end)
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by mangold » Wed Dec 01, 2004 3:14 pm
it sounds like your singing while being strangled... you can sing on the inhale too you know. the guitar was good, exactly like dave, try and add a little somethin to it. keep posting
ill just sit by and wait for swede to yell at me for commenting on some1's singing again...*sigh*
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by wench » Wed Dec 01, 2004 5:23 pm
it sounds like your singing while being strangled... you can sing on the inhale too you know. the guitar was good, exactly like dave, try and add a little somethin to it. keep posting
haha thanks...are you saying I inhale too much or that my voice itself sounds strangled and shit
note: I play more than half the song with the b and e strings riging open (ie not Dave) and the second guitar i think should qualify as "a little somethin" at least but I see what yous sayin
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by mangold » Wed Dec 01, 2004 6:28 pm
wench wrote:it sounds like your singing while being strangled... you can sing on the inhale too you know. the guitar was good, exactly like dave, try and add a little somethin to it. keep posting
haha thanks...are you saying I inhale too much or that my voice itself sounds strangled and shit
note: I play more than half the song with the b and e strings riging open (ie not Dave) and the second guitar i think should qualify as "a little somethin" at least but I see what yous sayin
the 2nd guitar was nice, and as a cover, guitar wise, this was flawless.
if you wanted to take it beyond a cover i was sayin you could mix up the strumming or throw in some muted notes, or atleast vary how hard you're playing at different parts of the song, maybe play parts palm muted, etc.
i was saying you exhaled too much, you were singing under your breath. you hit the notes tho, id like to see you really belt it in your next post. keep em comin.
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by Swe dmbfan » Wed Dec 01, 2004 6:36 pm
praisedave wrote:it sounds like your singing while being strangled... you can sing on the inhale too you know. the guitar was good, exactly like dave, try and add a little somethin to it. keep posting
ill just sit by and wait for swede to yell at me for commenting on some1's singing again...*sigh*
i dont have to tell you,, you already know!
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by mangold » Fri Jan 21, 2005 10:47 pm
you are being very non sensical
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