Fly on my little wing ...

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Fly on my little wing ...

Unread post by cgalves » Fri Nov 19, 2004 4:31 pm

First recording ever ... me and my friend were jamming and we decided to give his recording equipment a little run through. Its just me playing, Les Paul rhythm pickup (sorry about not using the treble, my treble pickup has loose connections or something).

Note: this was just one quick take, I didnt have time to perfect it, there are definetley alot of things that need to be cleaned up. But just give it a listen ...

http://www.unc.edu/~alves/Los%20-%20Little%20Wing.mp3
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Unread post by DropD-MB » Fri Nov 19, 2004 6:55 pm

Sounded good from what I can tell. I know the song & love it but dont know every detail of the song. The only thing that I would suggest is make the last solo part a bit tighter. It's kind of loose but otherwise I like it.
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Unread post by cgalves » Wed Nov 24, 2004 11:46 am

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comeon comeon comeon :D

anyone else have some constructive criticism?
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:40 pm

it fine. no problems could use lyrics and a rythm part.
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Unread post by bassman462 » Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:44 pm

nice man i like it.
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