write your own two step intro. (lyrics)

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write your own two step intro. (lyrics)

Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Nov 16, 2004 5:35 pm

ok!

write your own two step intro..(lyrics)

im working on mine...
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Unread post by gravesRR7 » Tue Nov 16, 2004 5:57 pm

after i do my homework, i might give it a shot
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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:07 pm

gravesRR7 wrote:after i do my homework, i might give it a shot
but id like to ad mine will kick all your's ass's
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Unread post by DustyDave » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:14 pm

Ok i'll give it a shot ....

So with his broken
Wings he came down to save her
And give her the life she deserves with him right there by her side
Happiness love
To survive and to return home
Hug and kiss all night long until the morning shines so bright

It was becoming a cliché :lol:
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:25 pm

i love when you read it and sing it like the intro.. nice dusty.. :D
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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:26 pm

oh we talkin lyrics or guitar part?
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:26 pm

filmdude100cms wrote:oh we talkin lyrics or guitar part?
lyrics.
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Unread post by DustyDave » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:29 pm

Swe dmbfan wrote:i love when you read it and sing it like the intro.. nice dusty.. :D
Thanks brother :)
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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:31 pm

So i find you here,
Wating for forgiveness from,
The memory of a lost love that you wish you could see now,
But here i find you all alone inside the storm,
And all the redemption youll find is waiting for you,
Here in the rain...
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:35 pm

filmdude100cms wrote:So i find you here,
Wating for forgiveness from,
The memory of a lost love that you wish you could see now,
But here i find you all along inside the storm,
And all the redemption youll find is waiting for you,
Here in the rain...
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Unread post by Chadrap127 » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:41 pm

So You Came Down
From The Heavens From High Above
Waiting, Watching, and guarding over me
but all of a sudden, there became a flash of light
and this angel has spoken, died, and lost the fight.
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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:52 pm

Chadrap127 wrote:So You Came Down
From The Heavens From High Above
Waiting, Watching, and guarding over me
but all of a sudden, there became a flash of light
and this angel has spoken, died, and lost the fight.
add a few words in the last line, or a short line before the last line, to keep it on temp and its perfect.
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Nov 16, 2004 6:59 pm

So my love she came back
She travelled home through the cloudy night
Like the wind, a heart of gold, as she told me
so let us dance now
and forget the time that went by
cuz all we could do, is remember the time that we had.
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Unread post by DropD-MB » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:31 pm

Love,
What is she doing to me,
Here in the cold I stand waiting for thee.
Bottled up & wild thoughts,
I can't wait to love you until my heart stops.

Ha...That's Gay.
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Unread post by Chadrap127 » Tue Nov 16, 2004 7:42 pm

So You Came Down
From The Heavens From High Above
Waiting, Watching, and guarding over me
but all of a sudden, there became a flash of light
but it was too late
and this angel has spoken, died, and lost the fight.


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