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Original - A friend and me - Open for Critique

Unread post by Tranman66 » Sat Nov 13, 2004 11:12 pm

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Listen to loserville. Open to all critique. This is written and sand by my friend.
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Unread post by MWR » Sat Nov 13, 2004 11:47 pm

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sat Nov 13, 2004 11:54 pm

Whooa dude. Did you listen to the right one? This is Loserville sang by my friend Tom Page. Its his song. It's not mine.
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Unread post by MWR » Sun Nov 14, 2004 12:15 am

Tranman66 wrote:Whooa dude. Did you listen to the right one? This is Loserville sang by my friend Tom Page. Its his song. It's not mine.
No I didn't but either way...
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Unread post by Mulletman » Sun Nov 14, 2004 12:56 am

no emotion at all in the voice. the words seem interesting the lead is really over eager i think. as a lead you really have to pick your spots rather than be a main part of the song. maybe if i heard this sang by a guy in his 60's by himself i might enjoy it but the voice isn't selling me at all sorry....
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