Please critique this SHORT intro riff I wrote just now

Coldchillin · Unread post by **Coldchillin** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 8:34 pm

I never wrote anything, and it's just guitar. PLEASE bash away.

http://www.angelfire.com/music6/andymangold

EDIT: It's listed as "Coldchillins demo"!

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 8:48 pm

good. clean well recorded. these old hags is gonna say its too davy. me like

Coldchillin · Unread post by **Coldchillin** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 10:58 pm

Somebody please! There are 30 views, but no replies...thanks...

yworry69 · Unread post by **yworry69** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 11:40 pm

It's pretty good and well recorded. Pretty simple but it's hard to critique a rift as well as you could a song because you have the oppurtunity to turn it into something really good or really crappy.

Coldchillin · Unread post by **Coldchillin** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 11:59 pm

That's true. Thanks a lot for the input! I just wanted to get some feelings on the riff before I took it any further.

MWR · Unread post by **MWR** » Tue Nov 09, 2004 12:04 am

Sounds good. Keep writing.

Coldchillin · Unread post by **Coldchillin** » Tue Nov 09, 2004 12:14 am

Thanks man! I really do appreciate it!

sunglassesatnight · Unread post by **sunglassesatnight** » Tue Nov 09, 2004 11:25 am

Sounds good, reminds of Matt Nathason stuff.

Coldchillin · Unread post by **Coldchillin** » Tue Nov 09, 2004 12:18 pm

Never heard of him. Is that a good thing? lol.

sunglassesatnight · Unread post by **sunglassesatnight** » Tue Nov 09, 2004 1:42 pm

I dig him, a lot of folks will tell you he sucks, but his studio stuff does him no justice. Find a live show just him and Matt Fish on cello. That's some fine shit.

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Please critique this SHORT intro riff I wrote just now

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