On The Blink Jam

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On The Blink Jam

Unread post by firedancer86 » Sat May 31, 2003 9:24 am

Ok, by now you are probably getting sick of it all, but I wanted to post this DL4 jam too...it is the verse part if you will, from In The Light...I revamped it and improved some licks and slides...tell me what you think...


http://www.cadenzaspell.com/ontheblink.mp3
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Sun Jun 01, 2003 4:42 pm

I am guessing this one is flawless too right? :?
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Wed Jun 04, 2003 8:51 am

Well I guess it sucks that bad then... :roll:


38 views, and 0 feedback...not a "hey, cool"...a, "whatever..." or even a " you need to stop playing altogether..." :(

people can be so cruel :cry:
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Unread post by ryopan » Wed Jun 04, 2003 9:48 pm

ill give it a listen in a bit. just checkin in to read alittle. class is in a bit.
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Jun 05, 2003 12:47 am

I liked it alot....catchy little tune :D

The only critique I have is that after about 02:30 it got a bit too busy.
There was a lot of nice fills in there.. just too much confusion..hehe..sorry that was stupid..

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Thu Jun 05, 2003 2:14 am

I think thats a great tune...it was really relaxing...It sounds like it should be in a sound track to a movie , which is a compliment...and like hillbilly said, it does get kinda busy with the slides...great work though. I dont really have anything to critique because it probably came out just like you wanted it to, and it sounded just fine to me, everything blended well and it was nice to listen to...

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