Song from me

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Unread post by captainp4 » Sun Oct 24, 2004 9:59 pm

i like the guitar riff, but the rhythm on it is almost too choppy, though i like the feel of it, maybe just a bit smoother it would be awesome.. i don't know. i have no idea what i'm talking about so i'll stop now. :thumbs up:


edit: oh yea.. if anyone wants me to send this to them on aim, just let me know, captainp4u1
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Unread post by sunglassesatnight » Sun Oct 24, 2004 10:52 pm

Thanks all of you for putting up with this shit and checking back, I really do appreciate it.
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Oct 25, 2004 8:32 am

Worked for me. Definetly funky. I liked that about it. Actually the ONLY thing I didn't like, is that you messed up a lot on that lick between the chords. But it's a good one. My only criticism is to master it a little more. It's a good little song.
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Unread post by sunglassesatnight » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:26 pm

It's been up for the last couple of days, so if anyone else cares to critique, go for it. Thanks so much.
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