MY ORIGINAL: ACOUSTIPLOSION IN G

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 10:38 am

this is my first original post and i am hesitant. but. it seems that nobody likes my covers so i'll see how they like this. its all G F C. i have lyrics but ill spare you....

goto the angelfire page in my sig...

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:03 pm

c'mon... whaddaya guys think?

Swe dmbfan · Unread post by **Swe dmbfan** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:13 pm

its sloppy... and the guitar dont fit together all the time..
and it really dont have rhythm...

but els.. good job.

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:17 pm

Swe dmbfan wrote:its sloppy... and the guitar dont fit together all the time..
and it really dont have rhythm...

but els.. good job.

when dont it fit together?

NoNotThat · Unread post by **NoNotThat** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:21 pm

I can't really seem to get into it
That first riff is kind of cool, but then there doesnt seem to be anything holding it together

Swe dmbfan · Unread post by **Swe dmbfan** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:21 pm

1.09
1.24,25,26
1.48,49

fatjack · Unread post by **fatjack** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:22 pm

if you are playing G F and C, then you aren't in the key of G...

fatjack · Unread post by **fatjack** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:25 pm

oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using

sunglassesatnight · Unread post by **sunglassesatnight** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:30 pm

Everyone wrote:You have just written the least unique song ever

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:33 pm

fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using

whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:34 pm

Swe dmbfan wrote:1.09
1.24,25,26
1.48,49

alright... ill try and fix that

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:34 pm

slimerdmb24 wrote:
Everyone wrote:You have just written the least unique song ever

aw... how so? how can i make it better?

fatjack · Unread post by **fatjack** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:42 pm

praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...

nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:56 pm

fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...
nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic

what type of rythm part would you suggest? im tryin to improve

NoNotThat · Unread post by **NoNotThat** » Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:57 pm

praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:
praisedave wrote:
fatjack wrote:oh yeah, and if you actually write a song using just G F C, you have just written the least unique song ever, ESPECIALLY with the rhythm you were using
whats wrong with the rythm? and i just used GFC for the backup parts...
nothing is wrong with it per se, it's just that using that type of rhythm with that progression makes the song very generic
what type of rythm part would you suggest? im tryin to improve

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