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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Mon Oct 18, 2004 7:50 pm

heres the link: first song on list (the other ones are before i joined the band so dont care for them http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/twoho ... nmusic.htm
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wrote it myself hehehehe


Do you remember we were walking?
Laying by the riverside
Melting cold ice in your mouth
In your mouth lay mine

Inside daisies, melted flowers
Under the cold blue sun we ran
Through the meadows chasing hours
That slipped through our hands

Wishing Back
To keep going forward we run
Hand in hand… here we go
Falling in
In between the lines of love
Wishing Back on you my love

If a year’s gone by we’re missing
Connections deep inside our eyes
Summer wishing for another
Another taste we could not find

What a place to be forgiven
The cathedrals of this hall
Yet I knew you would forsake me
And I would laugh out loud

Wishing Back
To keep going forward we run
Hand in hand… here we go
Falling in
In between the lines of love
Wishing Back on you my love

Remember I, played in the dreams you gave me
Remember I, danced to the dissonance
Remember I, run
I will run no more


Wishing Back... yea
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Mon Oct 18, 2004 7:53 pm

awsome lyrics man...mind if I steal them?

No really, I need lyrics and I like yours.
-BK

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Unread post by DropD-MB » Mon Oct 18, 2004 7:56 pm

Did you just rewrite Stay or Leave?

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Mon Oct 18, 2004 7:59 pm

no i just wrote it in math class after being told off by this girl i really liked
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Mon Oct 18, 2004 8:04 pm

youve been on a role lately
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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Mon Oct 18, 2004 9:25 pm

waht with being broken up?


by the way will someone listen to the song?
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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Unread post by Willin » Tue Oct 19, 2004 12:39 pm

Good soothing song. I like it. I like the singers voice, it reminds me of Dashboard Confessional. I'm not sure if it's you that's singing, but the singer should watch themselves on the really high notes in that song. He doesn't have quite that range and it sounds weak when he tries to reach them. Anyway, nice job!

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Tue Oct 19, 2004 3:48 pm

thanks, yea im the singer, and i know those notes are a bitch, plus i scared when i record after the music was recorded. thanks willin.
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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