Overhaul being done on Shattered Glass

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Jc
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Overhaul being done on Shattered Glass

Unread post by Jc » Sat Oct 16, 2004 5:19 pm

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Well I feel I released it in too early of a form that I'm not happy with... Thanks for the kind words but I shall return with this song again and it will be quite different and MUCH improved. It better be anyways :D

Thanks again though for the kind words all.
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Unread post by onid41 » Sat Oct 16, 2004 6:48 pm

pretty good man, i like the guitar playing, plus you got a good voice, keep it up
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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sat Oct 16, 2004 10:13 pm

I think the vocals may be a bit too bassy. I'd do a low end cut to make the vocals punch through a little better. There might be a little too much cymbol...it's crowding the overall sound. I like the solo guitar panning toward the end. Badass song otherwise. Makes me wanna beat someone up.

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Unread post by Jc » Sun Oct 17, 2004 12:22 am

Heh heh, I concur on the cymbals and I think with the vocals it might be a bit bassy but the overall volume is a bit too high. I already wrote it down somewhere in my production notes file :D Part of the problem is that I'm at my worst mixing a song right after performing it. I put a lot of energy into playing when I record and I try to match up the sound in my head to what I'm actually doing... So by the time I get what I want, I have no clarity left to be able to make decisions on sound levels :o It usually takes a day or two of listening until I notice certain things.

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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Oct 17, 2004 8:35 am

didn't work for me. i'll be back

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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Oct 17, 2004 8:37 am

didn't work for me. i'll be back

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