New song

Post recordings you have made here and get feedback from the community. Songwriting topics would also reside here.

Moderators: onid41, jkanter

Post Reply
Devils08
Posts: 35
Joined: Tue Jul 22, 2003 12:18 am
Location: New City
Contact:
Contact Devils08

New song

Unread post by Devils08 » Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:11 am

This is a song I helped my friend record. He wrote the lyrics and the basic music and I added some stuff on top. Let me know what you think.

Within My Grasp
Top
User avatar
GreyBlueAnt
DMBTabs.com Regular
Posts: 249
Joined: Tue Oct 07, 2003 11:49 am
Location: Las Cruces, NM
Contact:
Contact GreyBlueAnt

Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Tue Oct 12, 2004 2:59 pm

sounds good. good voice, but i'd turn down the decay rate on your reverb a little bit, maybe around 20-25ms, so you don't hear the echo for as long. guitar was good also. the only thing i'd say to fix is a few spots it's sounds like pitch was off for a second. but for the most part it was all good.
A word to the wise ain't necessary - it's the stupid ones that need the advice.
-Bill Cosby
Top
deceptivehero
Posts: 183
Joined: Sun Aug 08, 2004 2:24 am
Location: New Port Richey, Fl
Contact:
Contact deceptivehero

Unread post by deceptivehero » Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:15 pm

its really got a cool sound, I like it alot.
Top
User avatar
Swe dmbfan
DMBTabs.com Authority
Posts: 8241
Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2004 8:18 pm
Location: Stockholm, Sweden
Contact:
Contact Swe dmbfan

Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:19 pm

i like it man. good job.. really good job..
best on the board:

http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic ... &start=150

Speeny: You two are gods among men
Top
Post Reply

Return to “Recording & Critiquing”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 165 guests