K.B.Q - My song lyrics

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K.B.Q - My song lyrics

Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Fri May 16, 2003 7:08 pm

Hey guys. tell me if you like this song. its about the one who got away from me. God, she was hot.
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One time we walked along these crazy halls
Late nights we used to sit and talk and talk
now your gone, like a wild reflection of me
now your gone, even though your right next to me
CHORUS:
lady, came into this world to make me crazy
close enough to touch your lips
so far away i cant get through it
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reach out, getting close enough to touch you
pull back, retractiong hands slowly pollute
your mind, i think about it all the time
one night, doesnt have to be tonight

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Bridge: my lovely queen you came to me in the sweetest of my dreams
we walk we run, i remember i was lost in your eyes
now your gone, yet here we are staring you down
starin' at the ground
i'd take your hand if only you'd let me
lady...

(C)Copyright Sean Bryant
Thanks for reading. By the way, i copyrighted this song, so please dont steal it.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat May 17, 2003 1:37 pm

I see a mixture of " The Space Between " and " Say Goodbye " in here , i like it :)

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Sat May 17, 2003 4:38 pm

Dusty Dave, do you think i should change it? i dont want to be just a dave ripoff. i get it requested a lot form my friends, and think its pretty good, so...

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat May 17, 2003 4:59 pm

No i don't think it should be changed , it ain't a ripoff anyway , influenced probably but not a ripoff

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Sat May 17, 2003 9:17 pm

Thanks alot. i really love this website! :twisted: :o :lol: :wink: :roll: :!:

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun May 18, 2003 8:06 am

seanbryantkbq wrote:Thanks alot. i really love this website! :twisted: :o :lol: :wink: :roll: :!:
You better ;) :lol: How is it possible not to love it ? :lol:

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Unread post by rampaged.congt » Fri May 23, 2003 4:33 pm

hey there
like the lyrics a lot and as dusty said..not a rip-off at all!
you said you copyrighted your song..what did you mean by that?
just cuz you wrote "copyright..." below it? or what?
again..."nice lyrics" :wink:
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