Download: One of my songs

[SpicyItalian739]

This is a song I recorded yesterday with my band in my basement, let me know what ya'll think. Remember this isn't completely finished but rather a rough draft. Song picks up towards the end...

http://urbanemusic.com/dreams.wma

[DustyDave]

I just gave it a listen , and i liked it One thing though , either its just me who is very tired or the song has alot of tempo changes ? When playing with a full band that would make a kaos if the tempos go up and down .... Maybe its just me .... Anyone else noticed this ?

[SpicyItalian739]

we honestly write and play all acoustic but I threw an electric guitar and bass over when we recorded and it just didnt sound right when we slowed the chorus down so we fixed it, but not to worry we all have very good rhythm and our drummer does a pretty good job of keeping us in time without over-powering the acoustic music.

[longleggedfrog]

I must admit that I really liked the song and started to tap my foot. The stop/tempo change/intro in the beginning and the stop/tempo change/outro at the end didn't really fit for me but everything else was great. I didn't really listen for mistakes, I just listened to see if the melody and that was good and catchy.......and it was!! Keep it up!