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HumbleMonkey
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by HumbleMonkey » Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:11 pm
guitar was fine, i think your singing sounded better more towards the end when you were actually singing it more, most of the song i thought it was to close to talking in a low whispering kinda a voice so my suggestion is sing it more like you did at the end, good job
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by kcw » Wed Sep 29, 2004 3:11 pm
Your missing some notes when your playing. Listen to the acoustic version on Some Devil. Thats I how learned it. It sounds like your hammering on at the wrong spot.
It sounds fine and you can tell its the song but just little guitar things.
Dont whisper it sounds weird. You have a great voice just use it so we can hear you.
It sounds like your straining too. Sing from your diaphragm (sp) to get rid of the airy sort of sound. Just try to sing deeper in your stomach and once you start to do it right then you get a tingly feeling in your stomach and you start to sing fuller.
You have a great voice just need to work at it.
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by CBalvarez » Thu Sep 30, 2004 11:27 am
not bad bud, i like it when people dont struggle to try n' sound exactly like dave and put their own style to it. only suggestion is that your missin some hammer on/pul offs on the verse riff. although i know singin and playin at the same time throws me off somtimes too. overall good job.
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by mlb1399 » Thu Sep 30, 2004 1:10 pm
Not much to add, I pretty much agree with everyone else. Pretty close to getting it down pat.
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by mangold » Thu Sep 30, 2004 1:52 pm
mmm homsbowts an original eh!
edit: (after listening to song) your playing doesnt sound so much wrong as it does different, and ure tryin to hard to sound davy
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