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Unread post by NoNotThat » Sun Sep 19, 2004 2:28 pm

I was messing around one day and came up with this song called Violet, so I recorded it (one track, one guitar). I showed it to my friend Jon and he messed around with it a bit and called it VioleNt. I think this version is really neat, tell me what you think.

http://www.synthpatch.com/flowers/violeNt.mp3

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Unread post by i-am-me » Sun Sep 19, 2004 2:40 pm

I liked how that sounded. it was really cool. a nice instrumental type song. do you plan on keeping it as an instrumental? or are you gonna find lyrics one day?

nicely done.
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Unread post by hcole » Sun Sep 19, 2004 2:49 pm

you're very talented. I liked it.

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Unread post by chosta » Sun Sep 19, 2004 9:50 pm

yay insturmentals

i liked that, it sounds like love-story cutscene video game music
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Sep 20, 2004 2:28 am

I can't write melodies like that. Really thoughtful and subtle.
I would love a version with just the guitar or maybe with two and you could get some great counter melody thingys going. The little riff at 0:45-0:50 was particularly bad ass.
Your friends production was good. I like the reverb a lot and the sour note at the end ringing out was nice.

Keep 'em coming.

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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Tue Sep 28, 2004 5:17 pm

wow please put a tab up. oh my god, this is the best thing ive ever heard on this site. please put it up, i ve figured it out partly
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Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Tue Sep 28, 2004 5:18 pm

sarah i love you, in every way possible. more than any other man alive (or dead, if you float that way)
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

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Unread post by onid41 » Tue Sep 28, 2004 5:20 pm

wow sarah nice job
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue Sep 28, 2004 5:55 pm

Was that you or your friend playing? That sounded very nice.
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Unread post by NoNotThat » Tue Sep 28, 2004 6:04 pm

me playing

he added the effects

thanks guys

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Unread post by mbgreen » Tue Sep 28, 2004 6:15 pm

I liked the "hep hep hep hepppp."
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Sep 28, 2004 6:40 pm

nice..
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Unread post by CBalvarez » Tue Sep 28, 2004 8:18 pm

I dont think there is anything hotter to me than a girl that plays like that, positively fantastic, i was definately waitin for some vocals tho. And keep the song called Violet, i really dont see how violent fits that song at all.

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Unread post by TurnItToLove » Wed Sep 29, 2004 9:56 am

yay wifey <3333
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Unread post by CBalvarez » Wed Sep 29, 2004 10:31 am

TurnItToLove wrote:yay wifey <3333
HELL YES, FUCK THE YANKEES.

anyway, you should make that a full song, ive listened to that clip about 30 times since yesterday.

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