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Unread post by Easy E » Sun Sep 26, 2004 5:25 pm

http://fileserv1.soundclick.com/fastgG/ ... scover.mp3

Me and my buddies decided to cover this song, we are trying to get signed. Im hoping this gets our foot in the door.
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sun Sep 26, 2004 5:32 pm

The singer didn't sound in key at all and had no emotion at all.. music sounded spot on...sometimes it seemed a bit rushed though.. Pretty good cover, just the singer needs to actually sing..not talk with a upbeat voice..
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Sun Sep 26, 2004 5:40 pm

^

i agree.. his singing is kinda off.. it doesnt fit in at all with the melody.
he needs to follow the beat...
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Unread post by adamondo » Sun Sep 26, 2004 5:47 pm

Yeah that singing is really off.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:39 pm

Hmm.

First, when I heard the opening bass line, I was like "sweet, this is going to be cool"

....Then I heard the vocals. The were extremely bad. Sorry, I can't put it any other way. Not on key, no emotion, rushed, and just...very, very lacking.

The drummer and bassist are perfect no complaints.

The guitar is alright. He's having trouble hitting that second chord in the main riff thing. (:51) There's also that little pause (1:06). And that ringing of the last chord doesnt fit at all.

Overall, if you want to be signed, then record something different, and get a better singer.
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:42 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:Hmm.

First, when I heard the opening bass line, I was like "sweet, this is going to be cool"

....Then I heard the vocals. The were extremely bad. Sorry, I can't put it any other way. Not on key, no emotion, rushed, and just...very, very lacking.

The drummer and bassist are perfect no complaints.

The guitar is alright. He's having trouble hitting that second chord in the main riff thing. (:51) There's also that little pause (1:06). And that ringing of the last chord doesnt fit at all.

Overall, if you want to be signed, then record something different, and get a better singer.
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Sun Sep 26, 2004 9:45 pm

Oh my god, get rid of the singer.

and get the timing down. Drummer was off many times and often you guys came back on the "and" of Two. Yes, get the drummer a metronome.

Overll, loved the guitar and bass, hated the drummer and singer.
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Unread post by NoNotThat » Sun Sep 26, 2004 10:01 pm

the singer would be cool...in a weird way...but he's not very good.

and the drummer was off sometimes too...

actually, yeah, what BK said.

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Unread post by Beauford33 » Sun Sep 26, 2004 10:33 pm

NoNotThat wrote:the singer would be cool...in a weird way...but he's not very good.

and the drummer was off sometimes too...

actually, yeah, what BK said.
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Unread post by Easy E » Sun Sep 26, 2004 10:47 pm

wow you guys are too nice, I found that cover on College Humor and thought it was the worst thing I ever heard, I was just curious to see how you guys would react. It's not my band nor do I know anybody in it. I'm a very bored person.
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Sun Sep 26, 2004 10:50 pm

eze3484 wrote:wow you guys are too nice, I found that cover on College Humor and thought it was the worst thing I ever heard, I was just curious to see how you guys would react. It's not my band nor do I know anybody in it. I'm a very bored person.
Okay, whatever. But given the situation, I think we helped you out a lot. IE, he told you that your drummer and singers sucked ass so you wouldnt go and rally try to get signed.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Sep 27, 2004 1:43 pm

eze3484 wrote:wow you guys are too nice, I found that cover on College Humor and thought it was the worst thing I ever heard, I was just curious to see how you guys would react. It's not my band nor do I know anybody in it. I'm a very bored person.
ahhh i knew it. lol. I just didn't want to accuse you of it, becuase if it really was...
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Unread post by myxomatosis » Mon Sep 27, 2004 2:29 pm

I thought you were kidding :?
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Unread post by Easy E » Mon Sep 27, 2004 2:55 pm

I still cant believe how off that singer is.
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Mon Sep 27, 2004 4:16 pm

eze3484 wrote:I still cant believe how off that singer is.
its disturbing
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