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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Fri Sep 24, 2004 5:59 pm

yes, I know this my brothas...but I like to laugh about it now.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:44 pm

Very good rhythm.

Watch those tremelos. The trick is to get that sound without making it sound out of tune. (which yours did pretty much) Also work on that "I'm going awaaayyy" part. If you're not doing that hammer with your middle finger, try. Watch your rhtyhm on the breakdown jam, (the lead part) you strayed for a "hot" second. ;) I think one of your strings is a tad out of tune during the jam.

Great rhythm playing, you've got talent. The things I mentioned were very minor, don't sweat it. It was well done. :)
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Unread post by i-am-me » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:53 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:Very good rhythm.

Watch those tremelos. The trick is to get that sound without making it sound out of tune. (which yours did pretty much) Also work on that "I'm going awaaayyy" part. If you're not doing that hammer with your middle finger, try. Watch your rhtyhm on the breakdown jam, (the lead part) you strayed for a "hot" second. ;) I think one of your strings is a tad out of tune during the jam.

Great rhythm playing, you've got talent. The things I mentioned were very minor, don't sweat it. It was well done. :)
thanks a lot man. and as far as the rhythm goes, i didn't really try for anythinga t all on that. i don't really know how. haha. i just used pretty much the D major pentatonic and the relative minor and wahtever else sounded good. and there's a very good chance that the some strings were out of tune, i forgot to check. haha. but yea, that was just like...uh...i should do something here. haha.

thanks for the comment pat.
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Unread post by CBalvarez » Thu Sep 30, 2004 4:40 pm

i-am-me wrote:
TrippnBill686 wrote:
praisedave wrote:
DmbFanJason wrote:dude...totally diggin the title bro...as for the cover, very good playin...you got the song nailed pretty much, it's just going to take you just playing it over and over again like you love it! I've played Daves songs prolly more than Dave has played Dave's songs.
a bold statement... considering that dave has played like 4000 gigs from c'ville to cenral park... not to mention the fact that he wrote the songs. But i kno where your comin from, it took me like 4ever to get some songs down like Warehouse.
You don't know Jason. :P

And 4000? Heh.
clearly he has no idea......haha.

yea jason, i was posting and i was like..."how do i get the most attention...I'LL ACT LIKE THE GUYS WHO ARE ACTUALLY GOOD!"

haha.
are you kidding me, warehouse was the hardest for your? what about tripping billies or the stone, it took a couple days of frustration before i got those two down
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Unread post by mangold » Thu Sep 30, 2004 4:52 pm

CBalvarez wrote:
i-am-me wrote:
TrippnBill686 wrote:
praisedave wrote:
DmbFanJason wrote:dude...totally diggin the title bro...as for the cover, very good playin...you got the song nailed pretty much, it's just going to take you just playing it over and over again like you love it! I've played Daves songs prolly more than Dave has played Dave's songs.
a bold statement... considering that dave has played like 4000 gigs from c'ville to cenral park... not to mention the fact that he wrote the songs. But i kno where your comin from, it took me like 4ever to get some songs down like Warehouse.
You don't know Jason. :P

And 4000? Heh.
clearly he has no idea......haha.

yea jason, i was posting and i was like..."how do i get the most attention...I'LL ACT LIKE THE GUYS WHO ARE ACTUALLY GOOD!"

haha.
are you kidding me, warehouse was the hardest for your? what about tripping billies or the stone, it took a couple days of frustration before i got those two down
the stone was ez for me, billies took a bit longer but no where near warehouse, different playing styles i guess :)
btw guys i was trying ot exxagerate about teh gigs, i just didnt do it enough to make it obvious
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