Re-DID 'What Would You Say' with new g-tar. Pls Critique =)

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Re-DID 'What Would You Say' with new g-tar. Pls Critique =)

Unread post by MaveDatthews » Tue Aug 31, 2004 9:44 pm

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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:03 pm

i like the guitar!
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:09 pm

I'm not bashing you here bro but I think your voice is one of those hit or miss things, either people like it or they don't. Your voice stays in key which I like, but I really just can't fall into your voice. *shrug* I can't explain why I can't either. Just one of those things I suppose
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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:13 pm

i do have my own voice. just have a bad habit of trying to mimic dave.
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:16 pm

MaveDatthews wrote:i do have my own voice. just have a bad habit of trying to mimic dave.
Just make sure you know I'm not trying to bust your balls ;)


But I notice that you do try to sound like Dave, but that's not really the problem for me. I don't know its just too whiney? Shit I don't know what to call it. But like I said the important thing is is that you're staying in key, so props for that
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:22 pm

Are you listening to Dave while you play or do you play on your own?
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:30 pm

It was great again...I just didn't like the background vocals. Other then that, great job again
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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Tue Aug 31, 2004 10:40 pm

thnx alot guys, no i just play on my own.
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Unread post by something cool » Wed Sep 01, 2004 7:06 am

I liked the original version I listened to before. I think you should leave out the octave lower background vocals.

If you are going to keep trying this song, I'd like to hear it maybe a half step down.

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Unread post by onid41 » Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:23 am

good job again buddy
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Unread post by captainp4 » Wed Sep 01, 2004 1:47 pm

could do without the background vocals, sounds great other than that!


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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:03 pm

i thought it was good...what's the third note you are hitting on the intro verse? Because I know it's not the one on the tab. It sounds flat. As for the background vocals, the guy sounds kinda dead. But I thought you did a good job on the main vocals. I enjoy listening to your covers.

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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:05 pm

the bass note?
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Wed Sep 01, 2004 11:57 pm

you know .../5(low e) , 5, "4", /5 the third one sounds off...but it could be just cause the guitar is out of tune or something.

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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Wed Sep 01, 2004 11:58 pm

not bad at all man, i enjoyed.
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