my second halfway respectable recording of the stone

[DT]

ok last time i put up a pretty crappy version, but i was happy to put one up at all- a week later i think it sounds a lot better

me in the foregreound, my friend playing lightly in the background, just playin around, theres someone slapping his knee or something during it

http://www.angelfire.com/alt/tdt/the_stone_2.mp3

[AdamCU81]

ok its working now.......that's sweet, sounds clean. I don't really have much critisism of it, so cool.

[Jonny B Good]

Sounded pretty good mang. I especially enjoyed the random backgroudn noises and voices,..jk

Anyways...your main riff sounded pretty clean and consistend, which IMO is the toughest part of the song. I think the chorus could have used some better control on the muting. I heard a random string here and there whcih kinda threw the chords off a bit, and there was one point which the low e was hit pretty hard and really rang through. Maybe just a tad more work on the timing of the whole piece (i felt the post chorus notes didn't match up time was with the main riff) and you'll be golden.

Hope this doesn't sound harsh...just givin my critique..nothing personal. I go to art school so we critique dailey . nice job though!