Thinking Out Loud

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:30 pm

If you dl it, tell me what you think...good or bad, I want some real critiquing so that I can find what people think I need to work on...

http://www.cadenzaspell.com/thinkingoutloud.mp3

Pickles · Unread post by **Pickles** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:33 pm

sounds cool. i can hear this one too

.. good stuff. cant really notice anything bad about it.. its just awesome..

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:34 pm

thanks man...I really like playing the ascention part near the end...then slowing it down to half speed and so on...thanks...but what would make it better?

Pickles · Unread post by **Pickles** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:36 pm

firedancer86 wrote:thanks man...I really like playing the ascention part near the end...then slowing it down to half speed and so on...thanks...but what would make it better?

im hearing a little buzzing, maybe thats just because of how its recorded but you could always try to work on that

... i know when i had my mic it sometimes even got distortion because it was too loud. add some awesome lyrics to it and youre set

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:39 pm

shane wrote:
firedancer86 wrote:thanks man...I really like playing the ascention part near the end...then slowing it down to half speed and so on...thanks...but what would make it better?
im hearing a little buzzing, maybe thats just because of how its recorded but you could always try to work on that ... i know when i had my mic it sometimes even got distortion because it was too loud. add some awesome lyrics to it and youre set

lyrics are always a plus...

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:42 pm

Damn that sounded really cool, being it your own song I really dont know that I could/should tell you what to do to it, not that I think I have any suggestions for improving it anyways. I initially didnt like the 2:50 - 3:20 part cuz it slowed the song down but then I listened to it over and I think it sounds fine. I really dont know what to tell you to improve the song, its pretty badass. When did you make that up, if you say you made it up like 20 minutes ago Im gonna be pissed.

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:44 pm

no...lol...

about a year and a half ago...but i did recoerd it then...and havn't touched it since - lol

thanks man

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Wed Apr 30, 2003 6:49 am

WOW MAN! I know thats not very constructive but bladeeeeee hell!!
I've been listening to it ''in cognito'' cause i'm at work but when im at home i'll give it a blast hopefully i'll be able to give you something constructive...........damn man! im not jealous :shock:

gregplaysguitar · Unread post by **gregplaysguitar** » Wed Apr 30, 2003 10:45 am

I really enjoyed this one. NIce tune. I really liked the ascending progression twords the end. Very nice feel to it. Good chord choice. Thats about all I've got.

oh yeah, lyrics please

billywestom · Unread post by **billywestom** » Sat May 03, 2003 12:26 pm

Wow, all around great recording. I found myself freestyling words and melodies to that one. This song has great possibilities lyric wise. The parts just blend together so well. Thanks for this one! :wink:

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Sat May 03, 2003 1:09 pm

billywestom wrote:Wow, all around great recording. I found myself freestyling words and melodies to that one. This song has great possibilities lyric wise. The parts just blend together so well. Thanks for this one!

cool man...but what exactly do ya' mean by "thanks

"?

billywestom · Unread post by **billywestom** » Sat May 03, 2003 1:11 pm

i dont know, it's a refresher cover, one that brings good hopes for covers to come... :lol:

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Sat May 03, 2003 1:17 pm

lol...ok...cool man...

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