8 Originals

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 5:40 pm

Some have been heard before, most have not...check them out...

sweet dreams - I wrote the original chords down when I was 11...

sunrise - I have been working with the verse progression for some time now...the rest was on the spot NO practice...the good lead part is around 1:50 area... the reat is a joke lol...

october - old as dust...I have fun playing the spontaneous jazz chords, and I love cranking out that lead...

down and out - I wrote (or improved) this one the night I got my DL-4...weird spacey Timstuff...

thinking out loud - I wrote this to occupy my fingers once...I like to play it sometimes...I have fun playing the ascention part at around 2:14...then slowing it down to half speed at 3:22

for her - I wrote for my girlfriend of almost 2 years now...

lost - like d&o, improved the night I got my DL-4...

before i change - this was written before I changed...strings...lol...funky open C-like tuning...NO PRACTICE at all here...off the hip on the spot...as raw as it gets ; )

hope you guys like them and leave some input and help give me some advice on these...

C:\cadenzaspell.htm

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 6:23 pm

alright, there are more views of my BLANK POST then on this post :evil:

Jineaux and Tico...I am looking foreward to your advice especialy as regular composers :wink:

mbgreen · Unread post by **mbgreen** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 6:37 pm

No offense man, but I think you're saturating the market here. All of these postings are a bit overwhelming. If you want some good feedback, highlight a song every 4-5 days, instead of nine at once. Just a suggestion.

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 6:41 pm

Or just state which one or two your really proud of out of this list and I'll listen to it/them, eight is a pretty big list to listen to and critique.

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 6:44 pm

well listen to one of them every 4-5 days...I didn't say to listen to them all now you know...if I can host all of them, then so be it...not trying to saturate anything...I have the space, so I put them up...Tico didn't/doesn't get accused of doing so...listen to one...listen to none...doesn't matter, I leave all of them up for people outside of the boards too...my site doesn't revolve around the board...

mbgreen · Unread post by **mbgreen** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 6:53 pm

I'm not "accusing" anyone of doing anything. Of course you can host them all at once. I'm just saying that when I see a thread with "Check out my nine songs" as the subject I wont even look at it because it just sounds a little overwhelming. All Im saying is that if you make individual posts every so often about specific songs, you'll get more listens/critiques. Your post above with the :evil:

led me to believe you weren't satisfied with feedback...I was just making a suggestion to improve it.

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 6:56 pm

alright...sorry if that came across the wrong way (happening alot tonigh for some reason

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how about I say, CHECK OUT "SWEET DREAMS"...

sound good :lol:

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 7:00 pm

Bad mood? Anyway, will you put the url up, the one in your initial post doesnt work. I know its probably in your other posts but might as well have it here so we dont have to keep jumping around.

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 7:03 pm

here you go...

go to the "originals link"...having trouble with naming a new page and connecting it with my ftp...

http://www.cadenzaspell.com

Speenis · Unread post by **Speenis** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 7:09 pm

the originals link is to something on your computer, so it wont work for anyone else who tries it. Here is what that url is:
file:///C:/cadenzaspell.htm

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 7:11 pm

Yeah, doesnt work, let us know when you straighten all that stuff out.

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 7:19 pm

ok...still working on the site, but here is the link...

http://www.cadenzaspell.com/sweetdreams.mp3

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 7:27 pm

Well, you dont really critique originals, not that I have anything bad to say, so I dont know really know what to say besides that song was pretty tight, especially if you wrote that when you were 11, damn. Around 3:20 there sounded like there may have been some off notes on the lead part but I dont know, it was really cool and mellow, I really liked it.

mbgreen · Unread post by **mbgreen** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 7:34 pm

Sweet Dreams-

I really liked the song...very soothing. Have you written lyrics to the song yet? I think with some good words/melody, this could be a very solid song. I did like the accompanying melody you laid down on lead...maybe you could work with a few of those riffs for vocs? Or hell, just leave it as an instrumental piece. Either way, good job man. I cant believe you're only 16 - you're not even in your prime, which is scary.

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Thu Apr 24, 2003 8:00 pm

thanks guys...I'm not sure if I would want to putvocals to it...I just focus on the guitar...and by the way, I only wrote the main guitar parts at 11...not any of the leads...again, alot of that was improv witht the leads, but thanks for taking al listen...

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