Critique this song I am workion on

[schubox]

Sorry don't have the equipment to record this or anything bu t I will put the tab down, this is just something I have been messin with for like forever, first real attempt to write anything, I don't like it too much, any suggestions would be appreciated.

E-2--0--2--3---2----x---x---x----x---
B-3--3--3--3---3----3---3---3---3----
G-2--2--2--2---2----0---0---0---0----
D-0--0--0--0---0----x---x---x---x----
A---------------------3---x---3---x----
E---------------------x---3---x---3----



E-2--0--2--3---2----3---3---3---3-----3---3---3----3----
B-3--3--3--3---3----3---3---3---3-----3---3---3----3----
G-2--2--2--2---2----0---0---0---0-----0---0---0----0----
D-0--0--0--0---0----x---0---x---0-----0---0---0----0----
A---------------------3---x---3---x-----x---x---2----3----
E---------------------x---3---x---3-----2---3---x----x----

Then I just repeat, I am not sure where else to go. I think I am gonna throw the G and C2 chord into a bridge or a chorus or leave them, where they are, but I don't know, i am just stuck.

[firedancer86]

Looks (and sounds) solid to me dude...just remember that you can use the most basic chords you want if you have a good melody...melody is everything...

[schubox]

Thanks, I am trying to put some words with it now, and hopefully add some more chords, I am not sure though, thanks for the feedback though.