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Say Goodbye cover....

Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Apr 17, 2003 5:41 pm

Hey ya'll

Well here it is....tell me what you think...suggestions would be great.

http://www.angelfire.com/droid/mookman/Say_Goodbye.mp3

lata..........

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Apr 18, 2003 2:46 am

Come on guys..if you're gonna listen at least tell me what you think..

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Unread post by taylordb » Fri Apr 18, 2003 3:56 am

I've tried to download it several times, but your page has been suspended due to exceeding bandwidth :cry:

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Apr 18, 2003 4:04 am

taylordb wrote:I've tried to download it several times, but your page has been suspended due to exceeding bandwidth :cry:
ok...it should be back up now...

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Unread post by snoopdoug1 » Fri Apr 18, 2003 5:37 am

I'm listening now... I think your voice sounds great! Did you take lessons?

What do you use to record with? I'm just curious...

As for the guitar(not that I know much about this), but it sounds a little too slow... to me I think dave plays it faster... but overall... amazing like always. I think you might be the best person on here for covers. Great work! Keep em comin' :D

WOW! Great vocals at the end(4:17), where you scream! Simply amazing! I have to ask again... do you take lessons?!?!

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Unread post by IronMike778 » Fri Apr 18, 2003 5:49 am

Awesome job, Trippin'. I tell you, in a very short time you've become one of my fav's to listen to on these boards. You're sound quality is tremendous and your voice fits great. The opening riff and verse sound so damn good.....man you've got that down.

However, something about the chord progression on the chorus doesn't sound quite right. I think you definitely need to accentuate the lowest sounding note for each chord - ie the 5th string for the Bm, 6th string for the next chord (don't know its name), 5th string for the A, and 6th string for the F#/Dmaj7.

I hope this makes some sense.....listen to Luther College and you might get what I mean.

But like I said, you cover Dave EXTREMELY well.....keep 'em coming.
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Unread post by ScroogeMcDuck » Fri Apr 18, 2003 8:29 am

That sounds great. I'm really impressed. But, how come you don't have a bloody accent?
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Apr 18, 2003 9:25 am

Hey guys, thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.....now....
I'm listening now... I think your voice sounds great! Did you take lessons?

What do you use to record with? I'm just curious...

As for the guitar(not that I know much about this), but it sounds a little too slow... to me I think dave plays it faster... but overall... amazing like always. I think you might be the best person on here for covers. Great work! Keep em comin'

WOW! Great vocals at the end(4:17), where you scream! Simply amazing! I have to ask again... do you take lessons?!?!
Thanks snoop, no i haven't taken any lessons...im looking into it. :lol:
Slow ey? hmmm, i guess that depends which version you base it on...i wasn't going for the album version, I like variating the speed on it so I guess it's just preference..
Oh yeah, i use a boss BR-532 to record..
Thanks again man..
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Awesome job, Trippin'. I tell you, in a very short time you've become one of my fav's to listen to on these boards. You're sound quality is tremendous and your voice fits great. The opening riff and verse sound so damn good.....man you've got that down.

However, something about the chord progression on the chorus doesn't sound quite right. I think you definitely need to accentuate the lowest sounding note for each chord - ie the 5th string for the Bm, 6th string for the next chord (don't know its name), 5th string for the A, and 6th string for the F#/Dmaj7.

I hope this makes some sense.....listen to Luther College and you might get what I mean.

But like I said, you cover Dave EXTREMELY well.....keep 'em coming.
It's funny you should mention that about the chorus, I was thinking the same thing last night :o
I'll definately keep that in mind next time I play it... :D :D
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That sounds great. I'm really impressed. But, how come you don't have a bloody accent?

haha...i moved here from south africa.....luckily no accent....phew!!

Again, thanks for the critiques....im glad some people have the courtesy of actually posting some feedback.. :shock:

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Unread post by snoopdoug1 » Fri Apr 18, 2003 10:27 am

How do you get soooooo good w/o any singing lessons!

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Unread post by ScroogeMcDuck » Fri Apr 18, 2003 11:27 am

haha...i moved here from south africa.....luckily no accent....phew!!

Again, thanks for the critiques....im glad some people have the courtesy of actually posting some feedback.. :shock:
Is Dave popular in South Africa?
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Apr 18, 2003 12:01 pm

snoopdoug1 wrote:How do you get soooooo good w/o any singing lessons!
i wouldn't say im good.....i just practice alot, i guess just like anything else...im planning on getting alot better over the next few months, actually can't wait....yeeeeeeehaaaa! :D
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Is Dave popular in South Africa?
no not really, well dmb wasn't when i was there which close to three years ago......I've heard that the radio stations have been playing ''space between'' and so on..quite alot.
Weird, I went on holiday there a few months ago and walked into this skate shop and they were playing live at Red Rocks..that was a shock!
So I guess they're catching on... I first heard of dmb when my brother came back from a holiday in NYC with the under the table and dreaming album... it had just been released.
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Fri Apr 18, 2003 12:01 pm

good stuff man...I like it alot

only critiquing I could mention would be the verse prog...listen to LC and try to get that sliding ascention going if yoiu know what I mean...it would make it sound a little more "full" if you are understanding me...other than that, great job... :wink:
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Unread post by Lou » Fri Apr 18, 2003 12:15 pm

i liked it! particularly the ending part with the final "scream"....that was cool........keep it up man!

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Unread post by snoopdoug1 » Fri Apr 18, 2003 12:30 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
snoopdoug1 wrote:How do you get soooooo good w/o any singing lessons!
i wouldn't say im good.....i just practice alot, i guess just like anything else...im planning on getting alot better over the next few months, actually can't wait....yeeeeeeehaaaa! :D
Hmm, I guess I'd need to know how to practice first. You just sing songs or what? ;)

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Unread post by mbgreen » Fri Apr 18, 2003 1:38 pm

Hey miguel, sorry for the delay in respoding. I actually d/l this yesterday, but got lazy. I think you did a good job on this one...the only thing I noticed has already been addressed (the chorus thing,) so I really dont have much to add except to say "good job." Def keep posting your stuff up, I enjoy listening.
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