An Original Song

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An Original Song

Unread post by AdamCU81 » Thu Apr 17, 2003 10:20 pm

Here's a song I wrote last week and recorded today. It's called "Today Or Tomorrow," and was recorded as a single track.


http://www.angelfire.com/band2/adamcu81 ... morrow.mp3

I hope you enjoy....Please let me know if you have any suggestions.

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Unread post by ScroogeMcDuck » Fri Apr 18, 2003 8:21 am

Not bad. I liked it!
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Apr 18, 2003 8:46 am

Hey AdamCU81, good work man..that's quite a catchy little tune you've got there....the two riffs I heard were really cool but the song as a whole seemed like it was mostly just a build up...i kept expecting this awesome chorus.... just suggestion, maybe add a chorus to it.
It sounds really good, catchy lyrics too, overall it rocked..

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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Fri Apr 18, 2003 9:27 am

Simple, catchy, and interesting.....I really liked it. Exactly the kind of music I like and try to write.
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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Fri Apr 18, 2003 4:34 pm

thanks for the feedback!

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