Here's a song I wrote last week and recorded today. It's called "Today Or Tomorrow," and was recorded as a single track.
http://www.angelfire.com/band2/adamcu81 ... morrow.mp3
I hope you enjoy....Please let me know if you have any suggestions.
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Hey AdamCU81, good work man..that's quite a catchy little tune you've got there....the two riffs I heard were really cool but the song as a whole seemed like it was mostly just a build up...i kept expecting this awesome chorus.... just suggestion, maybe add a chorus to it.
It sounds really good, catchy lyrics too, overall it rocked..
It sounds really good, catchy lyrics too, overall it rocked..
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Simple, catchy, and interesting.....I really liked it. Exactly the kind of music I like and try to write.
"I tried to pass for nothing, but my dreams gave me away."
Check out some originals:
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Check out some originals:
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