Its been a long time since I've posted....almost a year. I went to college and got very busy very fast. Its weird, i dont even recognize most of the people around here and doubt if anyone remembers me. Anyways, I hope everything is well and I'm back for the time being. I'd really appreciate a critique of this original I just put together. I know the guitar work is not there, but w/ practice it will be. My main concern is with the vocals, but any advice would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks again....and its good to be back
Jason
Oh yeah, the link http://www.angelfire.com/creep/jrusman/ (its the only link on this site, thanks again)
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i enjoyed this song a lot. vocals were just a little bit soft, had trouble hearing them. but i like the guitar riff. good stuff. 
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