Original and my grand return

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Original and my grand return

Unread post by JaDaRu » Thu Jul 15, 2004 11:59 pm

Its been a long time since I've posted....almost a year. I went to college and got very busy very fast. Its weird, i dont even recognize most of the people around here and doubt if anyone remembers me. Anyways, I hope everything is well and I'm back for the time being. I'd really appreciate a critique of this original I just put together. I know the guitar work is not there, but w/ practice it will be. My main concern is with the vocals, but any advice would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks again....and its good to be back

Jason

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Unread post by Brock » Fri Jul 16, 2004 12:00 am

Can't listen to the song at the moment, but I remember you. Welcome back :)
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Unread post by JaDaRu » Fri Jul 16, 2004 12:05 am

Haha...thanks
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Unread post by whatshername » Fri Jul 16, 2004 12:17 am

i enjoyed this song a lot. vocals were just a little bit soft, had trouble hearing them. but i like the guitar riff. good stuff. :D

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Unread post by JaDaRu » Fri Jul 16, 2004 12:20 am

gracias amiga
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