Acoustic Originals & Free Demo CD!

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Acoustic Originals & Free Demo CD!

Unread post by jwool » Mon Jun 14, 2004 10:13 pm

Hey everyone, here's one of my acoustic songs. Check it out...if you like it, I'll mail you a free 17 song Demo with all acoustic songs just like it. Just send me an email at info@jeffwool.com with your address. I'd love to hear what you think. Thanks for listening, and I hope you enjoy the music.


http://www.jeffwool.com/jeffwool-notfarenough(live).mp3



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Unread post by MWR » Tue Jun 15, 2004 12:37 am

Great stuff man.

My only qualm is that you tend to over-enunciate kinda like the singer from Matchbox 20. I don't suppose you'll be able to change that very easily but I find it disracts/detracts from great vocals.

I'm gonna explore the site more. :D

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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Tue Jun 15, 2004 4:56 pm

MWR wrote:
... that you tend to over-enunciate
Good pickup, i was about to say the same thing. But, i dont think you will be able to easily change this; its not really a problem, more of a nuance.
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Unread post by mastermindmatthews3436 » Mon Jun 28, 2004 11:47 am

i have the cd, very good i must say..everyone should check jeff out, this guy has lots of potential talent...keep it up man, peace
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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Tue Jun 29, 2004 7:27 am

Great job Jeff. I enjoyed listening to your music. You are very good at vocal melody and the songs are put together quite well. I didn't feel like it was very hooky though.....I wasn't really taken in or taken away by the lyrics. But I'm also at work and may not be listening as well as I could. I will definitely listen to more of your stuff.
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Unread post by Xoosh » Sun Jul 04, 2004 12:20 am

heye man. i definitely dig what you're doing... but it's not doing much for me. The guitar is kinda dead to me... reminds me of some cheesey christian rock.... with all the timed stops and well... i just think it could be a whole lot stronger. i like it. but it doesnt move me. (not that im saying all music should, but that it is trying to do something with the emotion given out, but it falls short for me, which is why it pertains to this particular setting...)

though i'd probably really enjoy you live if you were animated enough on stage and got into the music =)

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Unread post by voodoochild » Wed Jul 14, 2004 12:29 pm

I loved the song. And no matter what ayone says, the vocals are great too.

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Unread post by dmfollower » Wed Jul 14, 2004 4:34 pm

Xoosh wrote:The guitar is kinda dead to me... reminds me of some cheesey christian rock.... with all the timed stops and well...
I got that vibe as well. But you've got a great voice, mine slips out of tune from time to time.
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Unread post by charliemike » Wed Jul 14, 2004 5:22 pm

I'll mail you a free 17 song Demo with all acoustic songs just like it.
I'd like some variation ... :D

Jeff ... get rid of that whole "intro" thing ... it just doesn't fit ... just start with the stuff after :28

Good job though ... if you could find someone to play bass on that track for you it would really bring it to a new level.

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Unread post by deceptivehero » Sun Aug 08, 2004 11:15 am

I though the song was real good, you have a great voice.

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