Finally recorded one of my songs to post!!

[monkieonastring]

I just got back from a friends house, and he let me record one of my songs on his computer. I did the recording kind of fast, so it's got mistakes, but you'll be able to get the idea. Feel free to tell me what you think (good or bad?). I need all the help I can get. BTW it's the only link on my page (Song1.mp3).
Adam
http://www.angelfire.com/music6/gitplayer/

[longleggedfrog]

I was expecting to hear vocals..........instrumental would have been a better description. With that said, I felt like the beginning was rushed, I liked the first change and it seemed to fit, but the overall tempo seems rushed. Mistakes are nothing big, we are used to that here, but that Dark/Minor feel could be a bit slower, let the notes resonate.

[MWR]

There's a lot pieces here that need to be put together. I think you have a good frame though.

[katie]

hmmm...

nice start, good vibe. It has alot to say with no words. enjoying the pickin in the middle. awfully fast. slowed down....hehe took me by surprise. The epiphany part is interesting where the notes get higher. I love the blam ba da bam. (I'll have to check the time) 1:45 would have loved to hear you go with that a little longer.

when you really slow it down and transition is great I keep wanting it to slow down. It's like your head is full of so many thoughts. ahhh there it is - slowed down with the pickin back and forth and back into it.

Has this feel of riding and almost like a spanish feel, like a duel and the slowing of the heart beat and then hitting the ground. reminds me vaguely of hello again in style. I just heard that one for the first time over on antsmarching.org.