My Stay Cover

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My Stay Cover

Unread post by CPTino3001 » Sun Apr 06, 2003 5:52 pm

After hearing Jason's cover, I wanted to give the song a go. I have to warn you, it gets extremely sloppy towards the end due to a massive cramp, but otherwise I think its alright. Not anything spectacular, but I'de love to hear you comments.

My Humble Stay Cover
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Unread post by billywestom » Mon Apr 07, 2003 1:36 am

ok listening to beginning, no lyrics so far...are there any....i guess not...anyway, your main riff is pretty good....your chorus is off quite a bit, just your rythm pattern (you are changing chords at the right time)...especially the F power chord, try to emphasize a hit on the chord where..."stay, stay..." would be...dont know what else to say...good job overall, it's a hard song to get the right rythm for..
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Unread post by CPTino3001 » Mon Apr 07, 2003 9:13 pm

I appriciate the response billy, I don't have a mic to record the vocals with, hence the silence...I'm working on the chorus part, hadn't practiced it much, but I think I got it now, the lyrics seemed to help w/ the rythm...lol...

After playing along with the Folsom Field DVD for a few more weeks, I'll try to post again...

Thanks again...

BTW, anymore advice would be greatly appriciated...still new and could use the help...
Favorite Shows:

DMB: 12/11/02 (Phillips Arena, Atlanta GA)
D&T: 03/29/03 (Appalachian State, Boone NC)

Ben Harper: 6/22/04 (Hammersmith Apollo, London UK)
The Allman Brothers Band: 9/26/04 (Fox Theater, Atlanta GA)
Van Halen: 9/17/04 (Atlanta, GA)
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