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An Original For You to Hear

Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:04 am

Here's a link to my first original that I'm putting out there.....here. It was made hastily.....yada yada yada....let me know what you think if you think anything. Thanks.

http://www.angelfire.com/pro/adamcu81/
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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:08 am

hey man......it's a dead link.....fix it and i'de like to take a listen.

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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:13 am

Wow! I can't believe how many people are always in this forum. Thanks for the heads up about the link....I fixed it.

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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:19 am

The link to your site works, but the link for the mp3 does not......i'm hanging in to hear it though!

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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:22 am

Well, I'm an idiot......here's the real link.

http://www.angelfire.com/pro/adamcu81/D ... s_Mind.mp3

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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:27 am

I like it.......nice voice......I'm not sure, and I've only listened to it once, but that is a funky timing on the verse part, interesting.......I like the chorus guitar and lyrics the best.......nice work man.

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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:32 am

Hey thanks greg for the speedy comment. I was listening to your #41 cover. That's a really creative twist on a classic. Sounds good.

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:38 am

I thought it was pretty good....it's an interesting timing you have on that first riff, like I think its going to end before it does or something?....It's a little plain for my taste, kinda like theres not a whole lot going on...anyway, i thought the vocals and guitar were solid...

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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:49 am

AdamCU81 wrote:Hey thanks greg for the speedy comment. I was listening to your #41 cover. That's a really creative twist on a classic. Sounds good.
Thanks, but we had the easy job of arranging existing material......your the creative one coming up with your own stuff......props to you! :P

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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Mon Apr 07, 2003 4:18 am

This song is up at a different site because angelfire keeps taking my sites down. So in case you wanted to have a listen and the site was down, go here:

http://www.geocities.com/adamcu81/My_Music_Page

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Unread post by gufs723 » Mon Apr 07, 2003 9:31 pm

I like the riff, but to me, it's missing something. Have you tried speeding it up a tiny bit? I just think it drags a bit. Other than that, it sounds pretty good.

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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Mon Apr 07, 2003 10:36 pm

yeah, i actually have sped it up and I think it sounds better. I guess I felt like recording it slow that day. Thanks for the advice.

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