#41

[trippinants13]

Here it is. It's not to bad, but still working on the falsettos. The outro needs some work also.



http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/trippinants13

[dmb_tatertot]

not bad, needs a little fine tuning, but was a good effort

[Raif2032]

The first thing is that you fall flat on the vocals, a lot. Try to find a vocal style/range you're comfortable with....sing some songs that aren't dave so that you can try to feel out and you won't be so prone to trying to emulate dave-isms.

Liked how you strummed out some of the guitar part, it was good. Keep playin' dude

[bryanwie]

Hey,


You're flat, obviously, but also, i dont think you are actually singin falsetto. It sounds like you are tightening the crap outa you're throat and just pushing air through. Falsetto should feel like its resonationg right behind you're nose. Try singing some queen stuff, thats falsetto. Overall, great stuff, keep truckin.

[MWR]

I wouldn't worry about your falsetto which acutally wasn't that bad. Your chest voice (everything not falsetto) however needs some work. The main problem is that your extremely nasal which is common but it's easy to fix-just don't sing through your nose. If you can't tell than pinch it closed while your singing and it should become clear(whether or not your nasal that is). Of course the hard part will be training yourself to not do it but there's no free lunch.
Don't feel hopeless though. I'm a firm believer that anyone who puts effort into improving their voice can be a great singer. And don't fool yourself, singing is very difficult. For me it's proven to be every bit as challenging as learning the guitar.