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Lie In Our Graves Cover

Unread post by DMB=ice » Wed Mar 26, 2003 4:13 pm

This is the first time I've ever recorded my voice so bear with it. Theres a couple of glitches in the recording due to stupid mistakes by me. Anyway tell me what you guys think. Thanks.

http://webpages.charter.net/guitarplayi ... Graves.mp3

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Unread post by DMB=ice » Wed Mar 26, 2003 4:20 pm

Oh yeah this is probably for the contest, after xoosh and jkanter post theirs we can start voting if thats cool with everyone and they want to do it.

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Unread post by juineaux » Wed Mar 26, 2003 4:57 pm

Good cover :)
That is one of my favorite DMB songs, and you dont here it covered that much. but the effect on the voice is a little too heavy.

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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Wed Mar 26, 2003 5:07 pm

guitar sounds good, but there is way to much effect on the voice......love the tim fills..........nice work with those....the jam sounds incredible...overall good, and recording the voice can be a difficult task at first......just keep practicing.....sounds good.

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Unread post by DMB=ice » Wed Mar 26, 2003 5:12 pm

I dont remember putting any effects on the voice, maybe it accidentally did when i put it on a guitar track. Lemme fix that

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Unread post by DMB=ice » Wed Mar 26, 2003 6:04 pm

Yeah, those effects were definately not supposed to be there so this should be better (depending if my voice is any good or not :) ).

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Wed Mar 26, 2003 6:05 pm

yo....the guitar work was great! I have to admit the voice scared the shit out of me at first though...not that it was bad, just that its so loud...the vocals were a little off-key from time to time...I would take another listen to how dave sings it and varies the pitch and the vocals will come out better...the rhythm guitar work sounded like mine :shock: ...that's gotta tell you something(j/k)

good job though brotha! lets hear another!

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Unread post by DMB=ice » Wed Mar 26, 2003 6:06 pm

oh yeah new link

http://webpages.charter.net/guitarplayi ... iognew.mp3

(should work in a couple of min)

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Unread post by DMB=ice » Wed Mar 26, 2003 10:42 pm

Anyone else wanna say somethin, this one is without the messed up effects that were accidentally on there. Please comment.

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Unread post by DMB=ice » Thu Mar 27, 2003 8:21 pm

cmon no one even said anything about the unmessed up version.

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Unread post by snoopdoug1 » Sat Mar 29, 2003 11:13 am

I'm downloading now! I'll report later

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Unread post by snoopdoug1 » Sat Mar 29, 2003 12:56 pm

Sounded really nice :) I don't know how to really analyze it because I can't even play 1 song :(

Good work :)

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Unread post by DMB=ice » Sat Mar 29, 2003 11:56 pm

Thank you for responding at least!

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Unread post by mbgreen » Mon Mar 31, 2003 5:41 am

The guitar work was very, very good. The only thing I noticed there was that you sped up a lot at the end. Start at the beginning and seek to the end to see what Im talking about. I really liked the lead track - great job on that.

As far as the vocs go, there was some jerking around (try a little softer at times maybe - difficult to describe) but they were pretty good on the whole. Nice job.
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