What Would You Say? Cover... Tell me what you think?

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Poll ended at Fri Jun 18, 2004 2:42 am

Lie in Our Graves
2
11%
Cry Freedom
4
22%
The Stone
4
22%
Lover Lay Down
2
11%
Best of What's Around
6
33%
 
Total votes: 18

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What Would You Say? Cover... Tell me what you think?

Unread post by BlueWaters » Fri Jun 11, 2004 2:42 am

This one is my favorite cover so far... I just started playing it a few days ago, but I think it's chill as hell. Tell me what you think guys... enjoy

What Would You Say?

I'll leave the poll for while I'm away on vacation, see you guys in a week... peace
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Unread post by Buck23 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 8:45 am

this is definitely your best cover yet. the only critique I could possibly find is that at some points you're "chasing" to catch up with the next line, but dave has two voice tracks on UTTAD and leaves vocals out on LaLC, so I'm impressed you sang them all in the first place. VERY nicely done.

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Re: What Would You Say? Sounds Great

Unread post by tjmac66pc » Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:01 am

BlueWaters wrote:This one is my favorite cover so far... I just started playing it a few days ago, but I think it's chill as hell. Tell me what you think guys... enjoy

What Would You Say?

I'll leave the poll for while I'm away on vacation, see you guys in a week... peace
nice job dude, i liked this cover... your others sucked though...just kidding :twisted:

i was thoroughly impressed... I voted for you to do Lover Lay Down in your next cover...i look forward to it...keep up the good work!

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Unread post by Matty Boom » Fri Jun 11, 2004 6:17 pm

great job

really solid in pretty much every aspect
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Unread post by i-am-me » Fri Jun 11, 2004 9:50 pm

very good job. my only criticism is on the bend. try and make that release really obviuos.. that's what makes the bend for me. its not the same without the bend back down to the original note.
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Unread post by mdel21 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:20 pm

Don't toot your own horn in the thread titles

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Unread post by MWR » Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:17 pm

mdel21 wrote:Don't toot your own horn in the thread titles
Ummmmmm yeahhh, I'm gonna have to go ahead and agree with ya there.

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Unread post by mdel21 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:21 pm

"THIS IS MY COVER AND IT'S THE GREATEST THING EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Unread post by BlueWaters » Sat Jun 12, 2004 12:13 am

i-am-me wrote:very good job. my only criticism is on the bend. try and make that release really obviuos.. that's what makes the bend for me. its not the same without the bend back down to the original note.
I know about the bend... I was having trouble finding the string to pluck and didn't find it until like half way through. It was rushed in a way, but that's how I do things. Mdel, MWR... sorry about that. I thought this was my best so I thought I would throw that out there, I'll change it though; you guys have a critique for me on the cover? Peace all, I'll be back in a week...
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Unread post by mdel21 » Sat Jun 12, 2004 2:54 pm

Nice work.

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Unread post by MWR » Sat Jun 12, 2004 5:29 pm

I've nothing critical to say, it was a great cover. Awesome vocals.

I see what your going for with the laid back vibe. I really want to hear you open up a bit more though.

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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Sun Jun 13, 2004 12:59 am

very solid... couple times you rushed to catch up, but thats my only negative critique. well done
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Unread post by YouNeverNo41 » Mon Jul 05, 2004 1:27 am

good guitar, and great voice
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Re: What Would You Say? Cover... Tell me what you think?

Unread post by Ando » Mon Jul 05, 2004 1:35 am

BlueWaters wrote:This one is my favorite cover so far... I just started playing it a few days ago, but I think it's chill as hell. Tell me what you think guys... enjoy

What Would You Say?

I'll leave the poll for while I'm away on vacation, see you guys in a week... peace
Hey man, Good job. Solid yo

You've got a great voice. You remind me of seal..

I'd love to hear some of your originals, I don't visit this forum often... So maybe im just ignorant.
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