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Another cover...
hey guys...I know that I post a lot of covers, but this is fun...I was a little off-key sometimes, but just go ahead and critique this for me...give me some feedback...singing/guitar; good/bad is welcome...I would appreciate it if you could listen to the whole thing, as it gets better at the end...peace guys...
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i don't necessarily agree with nancies21, cause i like most of the other covers that you have done, but i dont think this is your song. i think you are switching between two octaves throughout the song, which doesnt sound good at all. it would be MUCH better if you stuck with one. i think that is why you were so off key. and you might just want to stay away from the last "crash into me" part...
p.s. you're listening to the storytellers version to much, you don't need to say EVERY EXACT word that he does (thank y'all)....
p.s. you're listening to the storytellers version to much, you don't need to say EVERY EXACT word that he does (thank y'all)....

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jason the guitar was good.......but your vocals were a joke. I've heard you sing every song you do perfectly in key with no intonation problems. I heard that and figured you were just jack assing around. If you were serious about the cover then I appologize, but the singing was "nothing like dave" and was pretty off key. Guitar work was good as usual. I just don't think you were serious about this cover.
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yeah, i agree greg. this is jason insulting people who try to do something different.
and no jason, it does not get any better at the end. you just said that to get people to listen to the whole freaking thing.
and no jason, it does not get any better at the end. you just said that to get people to listen to the whole freaking thing.
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Yeah, given your comments in the "interpretation" thread about what that entails on this board, I have a hard time believing that. If this isn't supposed to be some sort of a joke, would you kindly explain how it is that you totally forgot how to sing?
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Jason........I have tried, REALLY, tried to enjoy your covers because they are so accurate. Then I realized I should just listen to the real deal, cause you don't bring anything new to the music. It's like your a Xerox machine. In every reply I've ever given your stuff it's how good it sounds, but your attitude makes listening to your stuff boring. Your arrogant and cocky, two things that we just don't need any more of. But Tico is right.......he's not the instagator, you are.DmbFanJason wrote:yea tico...notice how you are the first and only person to say that I am "insulting" people...lol....you love it baby.......turn the world against me with your instigating!!! ok. later all
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what the fuck are you talking about fuckhead?gregplaysguitar wrote:Jason........I have tried, REALLY, tried to enjoy your covers because they are so accurate. Then I realized I should just listen to the real deal, cause you don't bring anything new to the music. It's like your a Xerox machine. In every reply I've ever given your stuff it's how good it sounds, but your attitude makes listening to your stuff boring. Your arrogant and cocky, two things that we just don't need any more of. But Tico is right.......he's not the instagator, you are.DmbFanJason wrote:yea tico...notice how you are the first and only person to say that I am "insulting" people...lol....you love it baby.......turn the world against me with your instigating!!! ok. later all
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where the fuck do you get off thinking that I am insulting ANYBODY? who the fuck am I insulting??? huh??? When I was doing this I was gonna try recording while the album was playing...so I did...then I listened to it and realized my guitar wasnt in standard tuning and that it sounded so bad that it was hilarious to me...so I was gonna post it as a fuckin joke...I didnt do it to hurt anybody's feelings...you are a sensitive faggot and obviously have been getting assraped so many times by your dad that you have turned into an idotic faggot, if you think this is insulting...I mean come the fuck on man...see what tico sneakily started greg???
now you choirs boys can go ass-fuck yourselves...
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