Lyrics...Tell me what you think.

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Lyrics...Tell me what you think.

Unread post by JonTheSpaceMan » Fri May 21, 2004 9:20 pm

Tell me what yall think. i need some opions...be harsh be sweet. i dont care. TRUTH!

Buy time with luaghter
use it to wonder all the time.
how true how pure love
who true how pure our love can be
i stand here laying
in our home sweet home house we have built
in your little sweet room
door mats that talk when you move
and say love
do you remember.
cus now love i do recall
your beautiful minds around me
silk and curves all upon me
walk in the park with what ive got
warm breezes sunny beaches
wont you walk with me

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Unread post by JonTheSpaceMan » Fri May 21, 2004 9:23 pm

how true again not who true.

sorry

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Unread post by katie » Tue May 25, 2004 1:24 pm

really nice, almost seems a tad unfinished. great vibe!

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Unread post by JonTheSpaceMan » Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:43 pm

would it be dumb to sing these in public?
Please help me...there are worshipers on my ass and chest.

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Random movie quote to make you seem hip and "with it": A little bit of column A and a little bit of column B...
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Unread post by Beauford33 » Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:47 pm

yes...that is if you cant sing.
-BK

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Unread post by geekmug » Wed Jun 02, 2004 1:48 am

You can sing almost anything as long as you do it well, yah.

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