Satellite Cover

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Ryguy0097
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Satellite Cover

Unread post by Ryguy0097 » Wed May 26, 2004 11:50 pm

After almost a year of playing I decided to do my first cover. I know there are a few mistakes where I got a dull note. No Vocals yet....well probably never haha since I cant really sing but Feedback would be appreciated :-D thx again


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Unread post by jojo321 » Thu May 27, 2004 3:49 pm

really good job on the "rest high above the clouds" part

the verse was pretty good and consistent,

the "winters cold" part was good also, but if anything needs work, thats it. it kinda sounded like the strumming rhythim was off, but i am not sure.

but all in all, that is really good
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Unread post by Ryguy0097 » Thu May 27, 2004 4:24 pm

Thx a lot of for Critiquing :D

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Unread post by jared » Tue Jun 08, 2004 12:21 pm

very consistent in the intro parts! all and all very good man - i remember back in the day how hard it was to play this song and now its relatively easy. you def have it down, good job

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Unread post by BlueWaters » Thu Jun 10, 2004 2:16 am

Pretty good... my only comment would be that you should practice strumming. If you are going for your own thing, then forget it, but if you want to really cover Dave exactly with the guitar it helps to listen to him play, play along, and then practice... keep up the good work... peace
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Unread post by Todd Dreiling » Fri Jun 11, 2004 4:45 am

Your strumming didn't sound too great.. . . but don't get pissed, because all the parts you played were played correctly as far as hitting the appropriate notes/strings. . . The strumming was pretty choppy though.

gOOD none-the-less
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Unread post by Ryguy0097 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:25 pm

thx a lot of the tips guys, do u guys know why I could do to make my strumming not so choppy? thx again

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