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Warehouse cover

Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Wed Mar 19, 2003 8:52 pm

Hey Guys

This is a real ROUGH DRAFT!
I messed this up a few times, i've got a cold so I sound like crap...
Yeah I know im making excuses.. :lol:

Anyway..let me know what you think..

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Unread post by DustyDave » Wed Mar 19, 2003 9:46 pm

Very nice cover Trippin , it might just be me who's tired right now , but some places in the song it starts to get uhmm buzzy like some noise is interferring , is it just me ?

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Wed Mar 19, 2003 9:50 pm

DustyDave wrote:Very nice cover Trippin , it might just be me who's tired right now , but some places in the song it starts to get uhmm buzzy like some noise is interferring , is it just me ?
Thanks Dusty
Nope not you...it is there, my damned delay pedal!!!!!!!! Its giving me some 'buzzy' which i believe is the correct technical term for that... :lol:
Should have just bought a dl4...grrr

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Unread post by DustyDave » Wed Mar 19, 2003 9:58 pm

Ok thanks for clarifying that im not going nuts then :) besides that , great cover

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Wed Mar 19, 2003 10:43 pm

very good bro...especially the intro...good vocals...the first riff/verse, sounds a little off, like maybe you could try to pick the notes more, rather than just strum all the strings at once...the "keep all your sights on" chorus-the (/5 fret, 5 string part)-it sounds like there needs to be more strumming...very good though bro.

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Unread post by gregplaysguitar » Thu Mar 20, 2003 3:06 am

i'm diggin the intro.....more to come

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Mar 20, 2003 6:22 am

Thanks for the feedback ya'll....
It definately went down hill from the intro....eeeh..i'll work on it.. :lol:

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Unread post by oldman » Thu Mar 20, 2003 3:36 pm

Hey man....heres what i gots to say....

intro - KICKS ASS - awesome vocals, guitar and effects!

vocals get a little weak in the middle (but definately not bad), then pick up in the end and finish off the song great. That rough textured sound in your voice at the end is awesome. Good job!!

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Mar 20, 2003 8:08 pm

Thanks oldman! Im glad someone picked up on the outro bit.. :D :D

ps: wicked crush cover the other day

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Unread post by Lennox » Mon Mar 31, 2003 12:32 am

That was really awesome Trippin. The rhythm was really good, I think the biggest troubled area was the vocal parts. Still, all in all, it was really good. I was definitely getting into the music and the intro was amazing. What did you use to get that effect? Sounds great!

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Unread post by The Man of The Hour » Mon Mar 31, 2003 1:35 am

I liked the vocals the most man, you really put some soul into it!

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Unread post by ryopan » Mon Mar 31, 2003 10:46 am

kinda late on this. thought it was tight. sounded clean. guitar was great and the vocals were all out. good stuff man.
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