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Seek Up Cover - What Do You Think?

Unread post by BlueWaters » Sat May 15, 2004 1:24 am

I saw the other post for Seek Up and realized I should give it a shot myself. Check it out:

Seek Up

I would appreciate the criticism...
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Unread post by nugsta25 » Sat May 15, 2004 2:10 am

very nice guitar work brother
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Unread post by HCHaikuWarrior » Sun May 16, 2004 8:52 pm

not only good guitar work but vocals are awesome too.

great job.
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Unread post by BlueWaters » Tue May 18, 2004 4:16 am

Thanks Nugs and Haiku for the comments and confidence. I could use some good criticism though, I know I'm not perfect. More comments are always good though, he he he...
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Unread post by MWR » Tue May 18, 2004 3:45 pm

I only have a few pieces of advice:

Put a pop-filter on your mic unless your using a computer mic which it sounds like your are.

The vocals were a little rough at spots but I was very impressed overall. I think you could have had a bit more presence though. Not louder but more brilliant especially in your chest voice. Dave has a tendancy to keep the sound pushed up towards his head and that's what it sounds like your doing.

The guitar was spot on but it needed more low end. Once again if your using a computer/shitty mic there's nothing you can do.

Well done and keep posting.

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Unread post by Buck23 » Wed May 19, 2004 10:50 am

wow, great cover...if I had one criticism it would be that sometimes the second guitar covered up the main rhythm part in the chorus, but maybe thats what you were going for. nice singing.
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Unread post by BlueWaters » Wed May 19, 2004 1:27 pm

I was only playing with one guitar... is the rhythm supposed to be played through the chorus? I didn't think so. Thanks for the interest though, I got another one on its way...
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Unread post by Buck23 » Wed May 19, 2004 4:20 pm

wow, I guess thats a compliment then, you can make one guitar sound like 2.
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Unread post by DJR » Wed May 19, 2004 7:14 pm

i think the way you sang really fit the song well, good job

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Unread post by Brock » Wed May 19, 2004 9:11 pm

Wow, very nicely done. My only comment is that when it first started I said to myself, "Self, that's too slow" but I warmed to the speed really quickly. Great job.
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Unread post by BlueWaters » Wed May 19, 2004 11:12 pm

Thanks for all the responses guys... at first I thought no one cared, but I'm feeling more confident now in posting some more. I'll definitely be working on all the comments for my next recording/post... peace
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