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---One Sweet World Cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!---

Unread post by nancies21 » Thu Mar 13, 2003 10:56 pm

Sorry guys i know you're probably sick of all my damn covers! but i keep learning new songs and i get all excited and i just have to do this!! anyway... here it is

http://mywebpages.comcast.net/flynskier/osw.mp3

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Unread post by madtadder » Thu Mar 13, 2003 11:03 pm

sounds good, you definitely have the guitar down well. the only thing i have to say is that during the verse riff, after you play it, you're missing the pick scratches that dave plays. nothing big, but it would improve the overall sound if you learned those and put em in there. other than that, the guitar sounds great. and your voice sounds good, and within a couple weeks im sure i will finally be able to think of who your voice reminds me of, but until then, congrats....
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Unread post by Speenis » Thu Mar 13, 2003 11:05 pm

Sorry, but I got homework so I'm gonna keep it kinda short. Vocals were real nice, haven't heard your covers before so it sounded pretty damn good. One little really nittpicky thing I noticed was during the verse with the 8/10 slide, it sounded like you didn't really mute it after. It's just something really small and barely noticeable, but I just learned the song as well and have been playin it all week. Anyway, overall good solid cover in all aspects. Cya
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Unread post by Speenis » Thu Mar 13, 2003 11:07 pm

wow, I posted the same thing at the same time. Weird Stuff, anyway off to homework.
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Unread post by nancies21 » Thu Mar 13, 2003 11:25 pm

yeah i kno about the muting on the 8-10 slide, i didnt use a pick, for a softer effect, but yeah, i have trouble with that!! pisses me off! whenever i do the mute some other string always rings out or sumthin, so i just stuck to what i had, sorry about that!

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Unread post by jebro » Fri Mar 14, 2003 12:57 am

What no intro??? Im just being an ass. :wink: Excellent job man, that was really good. how long have you been playing?

keep up the good work.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Fri Mar 14, 2003 1:04 am

Nice work :)

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Unread post by DustyDave » Fri Mar 14, 2003 1:05 am

Wooooo hoooooo post 100

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Fri Mar 14, 2003 1:07 am

pretty good bro...I would say to work on that main riff though, as the muting is the key...you have a great ear, for what it's supposed to sound like...just need to practice...good singing, went off key sometimes, but you have a good strength behind it...great job bra.

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Unread post by nancies21 » Fri Mar 14, 2003 6:53 am

haha look bizatch! i recorded this at like 11 o clock, i was too tired to do the intro, especially to finger pick it, so SORRY lol jk, and thanks guys ill work on the main riff, and jebro ive been playin a lil over a year now

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Unread post by oldman » Fri Mar 14, 2003 7:57 am

Damn nice stuff dude! I've never actually tried that one before. Nice vocals and guitar. Great job!! Keep'em coming! If you want someone to review your stuff just sign onto AOL messenger and I'll check'em out for ya.
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Unread post by 4mbi3nt » Fri Mar 14, 2003 5:39 pm

Great job. Your timing is really good. One thing with your singing, you sing well. However, if your aim is to sing like dave you should try to "crack" your voice. When you make a change from a lower to higher or vice versa it sounds like you slide up or down the scale. Where as dave tends to "crack" from one note to the other. I don't know if it's really supposed to be called cracking, thats just what it sounds like to me. Similar to yodeling. I've listened to a few of your tracks, I think if you got that technique down your stuff would sound very close to daves. Again great work.
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Unread post by madtadder » Fri Mar 14, 2003 6:23 pm

4mbi3nt wrote:Great job. Your timing is really good. One thing with your singing, you sing well. However, if your aim is to sing like dave you should try to "crack" your voice. When you make a change from a lower to higher or vice versa it sounds like you slide up or down the scale. Where as dave tends to "crack" from one note to the other. I don't know if it's really supposed to be called cracking, thats just what it sounds like to me. Similar to yodeling. I've listened to a few of your tracks, I think if you got that technique down your stuff would sound very close to daves. Again great work.
i know what you mean, but not everyone wants to sound just like dave. myself, and nancies from what i can tell, like to sing in our natural voices instead of trying to sound like somebody else.
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Unread post by 4mbi3nt » Fri Mar 14, 2003 7:12 pm

madtadder wrote:
4mbi3nt wrote:Great job. Your timing is really good. One thing with your singing, you sing well. However, if your aim is to sing like dave you should try to "crack" your voice. When you make a change from a lower to higher or vice versa it sounds like you slide up or down the scale. Where as dave tends to "crack" from one note to the other. I don't know if it's really supposed to be called cracking, thats just what it sounds like to me. Similar to yodeling. I've listened to a few of your tracks, I think if you got that technique down your stuff would sound very close to daves. Again great work.
i know what you mean, but not everyone wants to sound just like dave. Myself, and nancies from what i can tell, like to sing in our natural voices instead of trying to sound like somebody else.
Yeah that's cool, didn't know if he was goin for the "Dave" sound or not. I don't really consider the technique to be just Dave's. The "crack/yodel" is very prominent in country music. Anyway, Nancies, if you're interested in the technique, it is learnable. I've been singing since I was 6 and it took me a bit but I got it down pretty decent (within my own ability of course).
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