My new song

[juineaux]

Hey this is a little sample of a new song I wrote. Its only a sample becuase my recording got interupted...so. Please tell me if you like it or not- thanks

New Song:
http://tomcadaret.iuma.com

[eclektik_rhythmz]

Good tune man, sounds like its comming along nicely.
Musically tight.

Now this is my consistent problem with your vocals...
1) PRONOUNCIATE MORE (its so hard to understand u in most tunes)
2) Try to add more of a range in your stuff b/c the vocals always stay in one spot so y not change em up more...

Just some helpful advice.
The Pronounciating thing was hard for me.

CHeers,
J.T.

[juineaux]

Now this is my consistent problem with your vocals...
1) PRONOUNCIATE MORE (its so hard to understand u in most tunes)
2) Try to add more of a range in your stuff b/c the vocals always stay in one spot so y not change em up more...

Yeah, I agree my vocals are really hard to understand. its probably my biggest problem. As far as my vocal melody and my range I think its pretty good, im not really going for the dave style up and down singing. But thnaks for the advice-

[DustyDave]

I have to agree with the vocally hard to understand , but i really dig your voice on this one very nice work bro , keep posting

[eclektik_rhythmz]

i wasn't suggesting u needed to do that on this tune but i just saying use a little vocal variation in some of your stuff...