All i wanted -Original

[lessthandmb]

My brothers band came to me with some songs to record for a demo for them. I usually dont cause im busy but i had time so check it out. If you want you could tell me if you like the song but i would like to hear some comments on the recording itself. Thanks guys..

http://www.parkstudios.org/all_i_wanted ... ic_mp3.mp3

[ElGuitarrista]

The recording quality is pretty good. I'd probably take the level of the guitar down relative to the vocals. The rythm just sounds a little to strong or harsh at times. For me, it was a distraction. In the 2:30's for example, the guitar sounds really harsh. I think the song itself has potential... Good job.

[AdamCU81]

I think I would take the treble down a little bit. The vocals and guitar, while good, were a little harsh. I would change the background vocals in places to harmonize better with the lead instead of just making more noise...especially the begining.

Otherwise, it's pretty good. The chord progression gets a little boring after a while. But I like the emotion.

[lessthandmb]

yea they didnt bring along their bass player so the bottom end is pretty empty and i recorded the acoustic with a pair of rode Nt5's which dont pick up any low end at all. But thanks ill tell let them know u guys think the song has potential.