Working on a song - need some advice from you guys!

[dmbguitar718]

Okay, so I've been working on this song for a couple of days now. The thing is, I have two sections right now, and I'm not sure if they are too awkward to fit together... What do you think? I'm not sure if I should work on a better transition or scrap the whole thing completely! I need your help! I thinking it may sound too wierd.

Link:

http://www.patmcinnis.com/asong.mp3

[AdamCU81]

It sounds good except for the end of the second progression where you play a chord that isn't pleasing to the ear in a traditional sense. Just one chord that sounds a little off, but that might be what you were going for. Also, I don't think I'd play the two parts as many times in a row as you did.....but yea, I think it works.

[dmbguitar718]

thanks for the advice

as for the chord..yeah, i pretty sure I'm changing it. i dont like the way it sounds either. and as for the number of times i played them...this clip will be different than the final version

thanks again.

[NoNotThat]

advice is for morons

[dmbguitar718]

yeah, so I think i'm gonna scrap the whole first part, and make another part in E.