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OAR: Crazy Game of Poker -- Inside!

Unread post by whatshername » Sat Feb 28, 2004 9:44 pm

got bored sitting around...don't really feel up to going out, my cheeks are huge. so i recorded this for ya'll. had a hard time singing, my mouth hurts tonight. so here it is...let me know what you think.

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/fortyon ... poker1.mp3
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sat Feb 28, 2004 9:48 pm

LOVED IT LIKE WWWWWWWWHAAAAAAAT....great job on the intro even though i've never heard the song
B+P by offer only...thank you

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Unread post by Humble Monkey » Sat Feb 28, 2004 9:59 pm

Hell yeah!! I really like your voice, & I was impressed w/ your guitar skillz too...
I've always liked that song, & now you got me wanting to learn that begining riff; Thanks for sharing!

...& yes, don't go out tonight...record another song or two & post'em here instead :wink:

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Unread post by jsgksu » Sun Feb 29, 2004 8:33 pm

That was great, I loved it. I have to learn this song now, we always listen to this when were drunk and sing to it like idiots, can you point me in the direction of tab you used? But yeah, great song to cover and you did it real good, keep it up whit
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Unread post by whatshername » Sun Feb 29, 2004 10:07 pm

uhhhhh...i'm not even sure what tab i used. it's just very basic...C, G, Am, F...for the verses..then hammer on an Am for that middle part. as for the intro, check http://www.guitartabs.cc
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Unread post by whatshername » Sun Feb 29, 2004 10:08 pm

i also posted a hey girl cover...check that out too! :D
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Unread post by Speenis » Mon Mar 01, 2004 12:33 am

damn chica that was pizzimp.... your guitar skills really impressed me on this one. I wanna hear some Delicate Few next!!! Keep em comin
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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Mon Mar 01, 2004 5:22 am

Very cool song and great cover. It fits your voice well, and you handle the lyrics expertly. No critisism here.

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Unread post by whatshername » Mon Mar 01, 2004 1:34 pm

AdamCU81 wrote:Very cool song and great cover. It fits your voice well, and you handle the lyrics expertly. No critisism here.
wow, thanks. :D that means a lot coming from you, your stuff is awesome!
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Mar 01, 2004 6:39 pm

try addind a second track. i think that would worked better in the long run. the intro sounded kind of bland with just the solo. The guitar throughout the song was steady, but I think it would have been cool to see like a rhythm guitar solo, you know what i mean? like dave's little think on the LiC Watchtower. and in the intro, when you bended the note, bend it to where it supposed to be bent, dont leave it hanging there, it ind of sounded like a mess up.

but, overall i liked it, but i thinkit could have used another rhythm guitar or perhaps some more variation. keep up the good work. :)
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Unread post by whatshername » Mon Mar 01, 2004 6:55 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:try addind a second track. i think that would worked better in the long run. the intro sounded kind of bland with just the solo. The guitar throughout the song was steady, but I think it would have been cool to see like a rhythm guitar solo, you know what i mean? like dave's little think on the LiC Watchtower. and in the intro, when you bended the note, bend it to where it supposed to be bent, dont leave it hanging there, it ind of sounded like a mess up.

but, overall i liked it, but i thinkit could have used another rhythm guitar or perhaps some more variation. keep up the good work. :)
it was a mess up. and i don't have a recording program, everything is just one track recorded live. a one-shot deal basically.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Mar 01, 2004 7:18 pm

ah. lol why didnt you just redo it? it was like the first few seconds.
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Unread post by whatshername » Mon Mar 01, 2004 7:22 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:ah. lol why didnt you just redo it? it was like the first few seconds.
i didn't even care..haha..after getting four wisdom teeth ripped out and having huge chipmunk cheeks, you tend to not care about some things. :)
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Mar 01, 2004 7:40 pm

haha damn, thats a pretty good voice considering . :lol:
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Unread post by mbgreen » Mon Mar 01, 2004 10:12 pm

good job...this song is fun. I always try to vary up the strumming a bit (reggea style, fast, slow, whatever) cause the damn progression gets boring after a bit. Nice though, Whit. :)
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