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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Wed Feb 25, 2004 9:10 am

I was hoping you guys could check out a song of mine.....BrighterSide. Let me know what you think. I finally re-recorded a few other songs as well, if you're interested, take a look. Thanks.

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Unread post by souna » Wed Feb 25, 2004 9:22 am

I licked BrighterSide the riff is very nice. your vocals are cool too although you went a little off at one point but other than that it was really good I will listen to the others later and give you my 2 cents
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Unread post by souna » Wed Feb 25, 2004 9:40 am

Ok I heard the others and I gotta say you got some tallent my friend I especially liked Sometimes and thinkingback. Al the riffs are very solid your voice is very nice the lyrics are nice too. your guitar sounds great what kind is it? Keep up the good work I'm impressed
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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Thu Feb 26, 2004 9:03 am

Thanks Souna, I appreciate the kind words. Glad you liked the music. I am playing with an alvarez...nothing special, but has a great sound. Recording with Magix software...which has been a life saver, you can fiddle around with things a bit more, and it just gives you a nice soft recording. I have a lot more songs, just need to get them recorded. Thanks again.
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Unread post by Jc » Thu Feb 26, 2004 9:37 am

"Thinking Back" sounds great with that alvarez.

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Unread post by horsmar15 » Thu Feb 26, 2004 2:19 pm

I really like the guitar in the song. Vocals could use a little bit of work, you went off key a couple of times, but nothing too bad. Nice job!
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Unread post by juineaux » Thu Feb 26, 2004 3:01 pm

I listened to your song and it sounded good. It stopped downloading at 1:13 for some reason, i thought the song was longer(prolly my evil computer, or evil angelfire). Anyways good job-

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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Thu Feb 26, 2004 5:32 pm

not sure about the downloading prob. Thanks for the kind words. I luv that alvarez, it has really inspired me. I know about the voice....man that thing keeps giving me problems.....
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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Thu Feb 26, 2004 5:35 pm

im likin that man, thats going on my desktop!
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Unread post by Mjazk26 » Wed May 26, 2004 12:59 pm

Nice you definitly have some talent!

The alvarez sounds great like always. I just got a Yairi you can't beat the quality for the price.

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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Wed May 26, 2004 1:07 pm

wow.......this is an old posting. But, it reminds me that I have some new music out there, and everyone is welcome to check it out. just click on the website. Alive and Well is my latest. Enjoy, and let me know what you think.
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Unread post by skpr41 » Wed May 26, 2004 2:51 pm

good stuff! enjoyed what i've heard sofar. thanks for posting!
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Unread post by Jer1400 » Wed May 26, 2004 11:20 pm

I like your stuff, man. It reminds me of The Beatles, in a way. Heh. You've got some skills, man. Keep it up!
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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Thu May 27, 2004 7:27 am

mjazk26, skpr41 & jer1400, thanks guys. I appreciate the boost, and i'm glad you liked what you heard. I could use some work on the vocals though....doing that soon, but other than that I really enjoy writing and I certainly like it if people enjoy what they hear. I have more songs to post and hopefully will soon. Thanks again.

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Unread post by katie » Fri May 28, 2004 11:57 am

checking them out - brighter side nice guitar, great rhythm. really nice melody - I love your name, longleggedfrog. If you are thinking about starting a band you should have someone back you up on the vocals. neat. look forward to more.

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